After Wearing a White Moonlight Stand-in

The latest chapter after wearing a white moonlight stand-in!

"After Wearing White Moonlight as a Substitute" is over. Although there may still be a story to be written, there are a lot of words that I can't hold back, so I'll write it first and then write it down. Let's think about this article a little bit.

Bai Yueguang is the longest and longest article I have written. ORZ started writing it in June 2019 and has been writing it until the end of April 2020, nearly a year. Since my manuscripts were used up shortly after I entered V, it was equivalent to streaking for a year, with no weekends and no holidays, and writing crashed.

In fact, before Bai Yueguang published the article, I didn't expect the grades to be so good.

Jinjiang's fantasy channel is very cold. I hesitated for a while before I started writing this article, but finally I made up my mind to write this lonely long novel that was destined to be so cold that no one would read it. The results were so good that I was a little surprised. Bai Yueguang's grades make me feel ashamed sometimes, because compared with other Jinjiang literature, it is a bit "virtuous and unmatched". Many of the literatures I like are written by the author with sophisticated writing and concise words, lively and humorous language, and the collection is often only limited to Thousands, and Bai Yueguang has too many shortcomings, and the 16w collection is obviously not commensurate.

Bai Yueguang is the first time for me to write a text with so many characters and such a long storyline. Like most girls, I would write a few words in my notebook in junior high school and high school, and then when I was 17 years old, I wrote my first A novel "The Male Protagonist and Others Are Old", I have been fishing for fish in 17 and 18 years, I didn't update it seriously, I didn't write it seriously, and I didn't mention the black history in the middle _(:з"∠)_ When I wrote the sick girl in 2019 , only began to earnestly update daily. In June 19, I wrote Bai Yueguang. After careful calculation, only "Male Protagonist, Others Old", "Sick Jiao" and "Bai Yueguang" were written seriously. As the third book, Bai Yueguang is really inexperienced, and there are many shortcomings reflected, such as the portrayal of the characters, the ending of various supporting lines, the control of the rhythm, the details of the plot, and the control of the overall situation. As I write and reflect, I reflect a lot.

1. Writing

I have mentioned in the first chapter of Weibo: I mentioned on the blog that some readers said that Bai Yueguang's writing is not as good as my last book "Sick Jiao". In fact, I deliberately wrote Bai Yueguang rough. Friends have said that I want to write something "rough" and focus more on the plot rather than the writing and characters.

Before, I pursued a more beautiful and fresh writing style, but to be honest, I think the plot of Sick Jiao is very weak, and even the character of the little perverted Wei Tansheng is not three-dimensional enough, because I think his character is relatively "virtual", There is no solid plot as a foundation. The character design is expressed by the plot, rather than piling up sentences. Now I try to pursue a writing that has a strong sense of picture and can substitute for emotions.

I think it's smooth without being slurred, with a strong sense of picture, and it's a good writing style that can express what I want to express. I have been pursuing this all the time, and when this is done, it will not be too late to carve out the writing.

However, due to streaking for a year, the update intensity is strong, so some of Bai Yueguang's words are indeed not as careful as Bing Jiao.

Second, the plot

In terms of the plot, I thought deeply about myself. Many readers say that Wanmei is too aggrieved, and Bai Yueguang is too aggrieved, my abuse point is really high, plus I am the author, sometimes I don't feel aggrieved and abused, and the readers are already mad. ORZ, I understand that everyone has been working and studying for a day, life is very hard, and I want to see something cool, but I don’t know Shuangwen Tianwen very well myself, and I always feel that Shuangshuangshuangshuangtiantian is so boring all the time, so I am in Baiyueguang. Li always couldn't help arranging various ups and downs in the plot. (╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻ In addition, I like to abuse characters to create characters. I just like to abuse my heart and like those tragic feelings, which leads to being scolded as a stepmother. Next time I will fight for peace The reader's brain waves are right!

There's a lot to be said for the plot.

I have said more than once that I have no ambition and I don’t want to write a large-scale essay, because I know that I don’t have the ability, but there are always readers who come and tell me that I have ambition, but my writing power is not worthy of it.

I don't have that ambition, really! ! ! Mainly because the role of Wanmei was born very early. In the first year of high school, I created a character called "Liu Zhewan". She is the most primitive Wanmei, and her personality is not much different from now. At that time, Daddy , Xiao Pei, Mei Kangping, the demon emperor Jiaying, the big brother and other characters have already begun to take shape.

When I was a freshman in high school, when I was writing something on paper, I couldn't help but spread it out. What kind of war between righteous and demons? When I wrote Bai Yueguang, I had to bite the bullet and fill in what I was ignorant and dug in my high school year. The pit of the righteous war.

Coupled with the influence of receiving dog thunder (who has already gotten out of the pit), he always wanted to create a lot of supporting roles that he was interested in, which led to the emergence of a series of supporting roles such as Meng Canglang and Senior Sister Bai.

These reasons will inevitably lead to a larger frame of the article, and I don't want to write a group portrait, I don't want to write a big pattern, so I have a hard time arranging supporting roles.

My focus is on the younger sister. I don't dare to write too many supporting roles, such as the story of the Cen family. I try to avoid writing supporting roles and write group portraits. The results I wrote were criticized for being too naive and unscientific. QAQ because I dare not write too many supporting roles

There will be some battles in the later chapters. I am worried that readers will be bored, and I dare not write about the game between forces. It seems very naive, like the old ones don’t exist, and it’s like a few young characters are playing the house.

Because of my forward thinking, my supporting characters are also very thin, unable to gather, the lines are scattered, I dare not spend more on the supporting characters, and I can't arrange these complicated lines well, and the character Li sentence does not write what I want. .

Mu Xiaoxiao is a very important supporting role, and it is also a supporting role that everyone hates. I myself don't like texts with vicious female supporting characters, because I think they are too hostile.

When I wrote the article before, I wanted to portray Mu Xiaoxiao as an innocent and cute original heroine, but my friend suggested that I write a vicious female supporting role, which is easy to slap in the face, and readers like to read it, otherwise it would be inconvenient to slap the face. On the one hand, I want to write according to what my friend said, but on the other hand, I can’t make a vicious female supporting role. I really can’t beat girls in the face with cruelty. It’s okay to write about male characters who are abused and slapped in the face, but I can’t do it. Female character's face.

Readers scolded more and more, and in the later stage, I simply gave it up, no matter how other articles treat vicious female supporting characters, I will do it.

Then, because of this, he was complained about "hater" and "worship" ORZ

Mu Xiaoxiao's contradiction actually originated from the contradiction I wrote. I wanted to portray her as a vicious female supporting actress, but I couldn't do it. In the end, I chose the vicious female supporting character, the Awakening Growth Line, but as soon as she appeared on the scene, she was outraged.

This is also a big shortcoming of mine, always influenced by readers.

Bai Yueguang's writing made me very stressed. I often lie on the floor and cry. After crying, I wipe my tears and continue to write. Moreover, Bai Yueguang's comment area is very messy, and after reading the comments many times, I want to die. I turned on the gas tank at home, worried that the explosion would blow up the house and the neighbor's house == harm others, I thought about it and closed it again, and then I wanted to eat that metronidazole with wine, and I wanted to burn charcoal, but I was worried that it would fall instead of dying. Disability, in a word, is lack of courage, timid and cowardly, there are many reasons to support me to live, my family is one reason, another very important reason is that Jinjiang V essay is not finished, only half of the money can be withdrawn.

I thought that if I died, I would not be able to take out the other half. I have suffered for so long because of this, and if I died, I was still busy working for nothing, so I am too miserable!

So I made up my mind to end it and die! (No), when I wrote about the episode of the ghost city, my dog ​​got lost. I walked ten miles every day to find the dog. I was desperate and cried every day. Because my condition was so bad, I mentioned it on Weibo. When I was in a bad state, and I was scolded for not being able to write well, I just sold it badly. At that time, I was really devastated! I just thought wow, I really feel wronged, I really tried my best to think about it, make an outline, reflect on myself, and bought a lot of related professional books.

My family took me to the hospital, saw a psychiatrist and took medicine. Taking medicine is really useful. Now there is no big problem. When it's over, I don't want to die anymore! (Hey!)

Knowing that most readers don't really like deputy CPs, I didn't dare to write the lines of Xiu Dog and Jiang Rou, Ruyi and Yu Xingzhi. These two deputy CPs were too unsuccessful.

I really care about reader comments, especially after going down the mountain, there are a lot of bad comments. I want to please readers, but I often use the wrong method, and the comment area is fried again, making everything a mess.

For example, Wanmei loses her memory, and arranges Wanmei to lose her memory. First, I want to introduce modern skills. Second, I think that after Wanmei has used the Sword of Zhuxie, it will be difficult to be more refreshing after using the Zhuxie Sword Manual. Afraid that readers will be bored, I want to write a story about "the king pretending to be bronze" in a different way. It's a little more interesting, but I didn't expect a lot of people who abandoned it because of this.

And the bald stalk from the previous post, I thought it would be more fun, and screwed up again!

Speaking of the plot, Bai Yueguang is an upgrade stream. I thought about it. I should let the awesome characters appear slowly one by one. The demon emperor appeared too early, the ceiling appeared too early, and there was no refreshment of the upgrade stream. ORZ upgrade stream The refreshing feeling is roughly due to the changes in the attitudes of people in the surrounding environment after the status change. In addition, I didn't set the character skills well, and I didn't set them well from the beginning, which made the later battle scenes very embarrassing.

As for the male protagonist, I didn't plan to set up a magic trick at first. I was the senior brother at first. Later, I thought about Xiao Pei, Xiao Bailong, and even jokingly thought about Ma Hall. However, there are also some problems with the creation of the magic method. In comparison, this character is a bit thin, but I dare not write and use those labels over and over again. As a result, he is actually not very grounded, and he feels very instrumental, as if in addition to When I fell in love with Wanmei, there was no such thing. I wanted to turn it around later and wanted to write a little more.

There is also the ending, I originally set it up, Fang Lingqing bento, Qi senior brother bento (died to push Yan Tianji) Meng Canglang and Bai Shanhu died in battle, Ruyi died for Yu Xingzhi, in short, died a lot. But this is too heavy and too much for a newspaper office. I finally thought about it and planned to borrow some modern ideas and knowledge to change everyone's ending. What I have presented is the current result.

It was said before that the Mid-Autumn Festival was an intermediate time period. Later, I changed the time line in my speech, which is also the reason.

I have said more than once that I have no ambition and do not want to write a big picture. I know my writing skills. Why I wrote the war drama is just because I filled in the holes in the previous article. Struggling to get the lunch.

In the final analysis, this article is the story of Wanmei's personal growth of blood and tears.

The initial outline of the plot was that Shiwon came out, killed a wave, everyone resisted, killed another wave, everyone continued to resist, died a wave, and won. Such.

After changing the settings, the plot was not arranged well, which may have made the ending of this plot rather rushed.

There are too many things I want to say, and I can't think about it all for a while. In short, I will write it here first, and then I will add it later! !

Thank you for reading my article, I remember the IDs of many readers! I remember many familiar IDs! ! There are also Ah Duan on Weibo, Tan Xi, the N-th power ladies of Wishing Star! The second aunt who has been supporting me with smashing thunder, spurned you for the slow update, Tang Mo Motang... and Fuxi who always left messages, opened the world, etc. I remember almost a hundred of them!

There are still many girls who appear frequently and then disappear. Although they did not reach the finale in the end, thank you for your willingness to read my article!