An Expert Is actually By My Side

　　 Evening.

　　 When it was time to eat, Hao Yun found a small restaurant near the company and arranged a table of snacks.

　　 Now that the company's financial situation is ample, he hasn't deliberately tried to be frugal. All the fish-flavored shredded pork, tomato scrambled eggs, pork ribs stew and so on are all arranged, and he ordered a box of beer.

　　 The only pity is that there are fewer people, not too busy.

　　There are three people in Tianyuan Pictures. The director, screenwriter and a secretary are added. Yunmeng Entertainment has Hao Yun on his own. Because it is inconvenient to talk about the script, he didn't even bring his crouching dragon and phoenix chicks.

　　 The name of the screenwriter sitting next to the field is Wang Xingkai, and his name is like a book writer.

　　 It's just that rough appearance, without a bit of bookishness, but like a butcher shouting in a vegetable market.

　　 stood up holding his glass, he handed out the wine to Hao Yun.

"Mr. Hao...or Brother Yunshen, when I was still in Yanjing, I often heard people in the circle say that your word is written like a poem, and its form and meaning are beautiful and impeccable. This cup I respect you, respect your literary talent!"

　　 "You're welcome, you're welcome... Mr. Hao doesn't have to, let me call me Hao Yun from now on."

　　 "Brother Yun! This name sounds good."

　　 Tian Ye's eyes lit up, and he nodded and smiled.

　　 "I think it works! Just call Brother Yun!"

　　 In terms of age, Hao Yun was at least ten years old from them, but if he was called Xiaoyun and seemed impolite, he would simply call Brother Yun.

　　 This not only reduces the age gap, but also doesn't appear to be divided.

　　 Hao Yun did not decline either, and silently respected everyone for a cup, which is considered to be acquiescence to this title.

　　 "Brother Tian, ​​I also make a toast. I wish our movie a smooth start and a smooth finish!"

　　 "Haha, then I will lend you auspicious words! But you have done two things with this glass of wine, which is not very authentic. I have to have another drink with you!"

　　 "It's easy to say!" Hao Yun smiled and touched a glass with Director He Tian and did it first. "There are enough wine tubes. Everyone starts to eat. Don't be polite."

　　 In Hao Yun's impression of socializing, he had participated in many times in his previous life, so he was quite comfortable in dealing with it.

　　 What's more interesting is that, no matter in this life or in the previous life, his drinking volume is surprisingly good, even if he doesn't like to drink very much.

　　 The few bottles in succession, like drinking water, didn't feel at all.

　　 After a few bottles of wine were drunk, the originally somewhat restrained atmosphere was also opened together with the scent of wine.

　　 "Hey! I didn't expect that at an age like you, I could write such a spiritual song! When I was in my freshman year, let alone writing songs, I couldn't sing up the tune."

　　 Tian Ye laughed and said.

　　 "Haha, your broken voice, let alone a dozen years ago, you may not be able to sing anything if you sing it now."

　　The secretary Li Xiaohui sitting next to him also laughed and teased, "Others are asking for money to sing, but our old Wang is dying to sing!"

　　 "Hahaha!"

　　 Hearing the laughter of several people, Hao Yun also smiled in his heart.

　　 Singing to death?

　　 By coincidence, there is one in his bedroom.

　　 was teased by Tian Ye and Secretary Li, the screenwriter Wang didn't take it to heart, but instead laughed and teased himself.

　　 "Hey, what can I do? If we can't sing up, we can only buy some words to make a living."

"The characters are not worse than you, I see the words that are easy to be cold with fireworks, and they are really written in my heart!" Tian Ye laughed, and then looked at Hao Yun, "Brother Yun, I forgot to ask. ......You have read the script too, how do you feel?"

　　 When he said this, Tian Ye actually meant something to show off in his heart.

　　 Although the script is not perfect in his opinion, it is very close to the world in his heart.

　　 Although it was a subjective feeling, he felt that Hao Yun's thoughts should be the same as his own.

　　 However, what he didn't expect was that when he talked about the script, Hao Yun, who was holding the cup, frowned slightly, something that was not simple.

　　 "Brother Tian, ​​do you want to hear me tell the truth or tell lies?"

　　 Tian Ye was taken aback for a moment, then looked at Wang Xingkai, smiled and threw the topic to him.

"it's up to you!"

　　 Wang Xingkai smiled and waved his hand.

　　 "Just tell the truth, let's accept criticism! Anyway, this thing is just a draft, and there will be changes later."

"Then I can tell the truth," Hao Yun said with a light cough, adjusting the expression on his entire face, "I'm afraid this script has to be changed a bit...just to talk about the outline, I think it might not be enough. "

　　 The room was quiet for a while.

　　 Hearing the latter sentence, Tian Ye opened his mouth, the expression on his face was a little weird.

　　 Secretary Li sitting next to him is the same. Obviously, he did not expect Hao Yun to give such an evaluation.

　　 On the other hand, looking at the screenwriter Wang Xingkai, the expression on his face became even more excited, and his entire face swelled into the color of pig liver.

　　 He knew how much effort it took to write that script.

　　 But now someone actually tells him that the outline part is not good?

　　 If it is someone else, no matter how good the article is, there will be something that doesn't appeal to people, and writers can't serve everyone.

　　 But this person is a composer and composer of fireworks and coldness. Who else understands the feelings contained in that song better than him?

　　 "Brother Yun, I have to say a few words about you," Tian Ye coughed softly, and said roundly, "The way we speak can be tactful..."

　　 Seeing the wink Tian Ye gave him, Hao Yun felt a little helpless even though he knew his kindness in his heart.

　　 Didn’t you ask my opinion?

　　 Then I will tell the truth.

"It's okay. You have the most say in this song. Your opinion is very important. What's more, I also said that I accept criticism." Wang Xingkai shook his head, raised his cup and stood up, "Brother Yun, I respect this cup. you!"

　　 After that, he touched the glass with Hao Yun, who also stood up, and then drank the wine in the glass happily.

　　 Looking at Wang Xingkai, who was obviously angry, Tian Ye tried to comfort him.

　　 "Pharaoh, don't take it to your heart. Brother Yun is just giving advice. After so many years of writing work, you have been cursed less by me?"

　　 "I didn't take it to my heart, but there is one thing I want to ask!"

With alcohol in his eyes, Wang Xingkai reluctantly sat back on the chair, staring at Hao Yun, and said with some unconvinced emotions, "I just want to know, you said there is a problem with my outline, what is the problem? where?"

　　 Looking at the more serious Wang Xingkai, Tian Ye shook his head dumbly.

　　 Just as he was thinking about how to play this round, Hao Yun, who was sitting across from the wine table, spoke slowly.

　　 "Brother Wang, first of all I have to say, I didn't mean to offend on purpose."

　　 Wang Xingkai nodded vigorously.

　　 "I know! I don't mean anything else, I just want to ask for advice!"

Hao Yun: "First of all, on the background of the story, I don't think you need to set it as the Wei state in the period of separatism, and then apply the customary routines of those classical martial arts movies. I just suggest... why don't you just stand it up? What about a world?"

　　 "Overhead?" Wang Xingkai was stunned, "How easy is it...This is not a fairy tale. We must consider the audience's viewing experience and the most critical sense of substitution!"

　　 In response to this statement, Director Tian also nodded, watching Hao Yun say sincerely.

　　 "Overhead view of the world is a difficult point, especially for the movie we are going to make."

　　 However——

　　 Hao Yun has his own ideas.

"I think the overhead worldview does not necessarily affect the sense of film substitution. As long as it is logically justified, I even think that the overhead worldview can create a unique viewing experience, so that the audience does not have to worry about the historical background of the story, but Focus on the story itself."

"I can probably guess that this script is probably based on the emotional line, and I want to shoot the kind of love that spans time...or a similar feeling. However, just to say the feeling after reading the script is the deadliest of it. One point is that the elements are really too complicated, but it dilutes the sense of existence of the main line itself."

　　 After listening to these words, Tian Ye's face showed a touch of deep thought.

　　 This sentence is said to his heart.

　　 The movies he made over the years seem to have problems in this regard.

　　 I wanted to shoot everything, I wanted to shoot everything best, but in the end, because there were too many fusion elements, I didn't shoot anything well.

　　 "Then what do you think... how should this script be changed?"

　　 Looking at Tian Ye's serious inquiring expression, Hao Yun's eyes floated with approval.

　　 Not bad.

　　 Although the potential is only 1, but unexpectedly able to listen.

　　 is always better than the donkey in his bedroom.

　　 "The reform is very simple, delete unnecessary things, and the important things will naturally become prominent."

　　 Hearing this ambiguous statement, a wry smile appeared on Secretary Li, who had been sitting next to him without speaking.

　　Wang Xingkai's screenwriter's reaction was even more direct, and he couldn't hold back a word.

　　 "It's so easy to say, change the outline... you change it, let me see."

　　 Hearing this, Hao Yun raised his eyebrows.

Hey?

　　 Let me change it?

Okay!

　　 No nonsense, Hao Yun filled his glass and stood up and took a sip.

　　 has been brewing emotions for about three to five seconds. He traced back the minutiae memories he had drawn from the memory fragments, and opened his mouth to say with the inspiration he got from a certain notebook.

　　 "During the Southern Dynasties, the heroes fought for years, and the soldiers continued to fight for years. But the Emperor Wen of the Song Dynasty in Luoyang was ten miles of willows, thousands of ancient temples, flourishing and picturesque, and a prosperous school..."

Although there is no detailed content about the original work of "Luoyang Garan Temple" in his memory, when he unlocked the song "Firework Easy to Cold" from the memory fragments, the background story and related memories of the song , Is also unlocked at the same time.

　　 It may be a little difficult for him to write a script from beginning to end, but if it's just an outline...

　　 is really no difficulty for him.

　　 In response to the three pairs of shocked eyes, Hao Yun continued speaking in a chanting tone.

　　 "In this picturesque Luoyang~www.ltnovel.com~ a general met a folk woman, and the two fell in love at first sight and settled for life."

　　 "However, the good times did not last long. The Northern Wei squadron suddenly rose up, swung the army south, broke through softly, forcibly crossed the Yellow River, and the sword pointed to Luoyang. On the other hand, the Song State has been defeated repeatedly, and the front line has no generals to defend against the enemy."

"On one side is the righteousness of the family and the country, on the other is the love of the children. The general held the woman's hand, promised to return to her side, and turned on the horse. And no one thought that this parting was actually parting life and death ."

　　 "The military disasters have been endless for years, the extremely prosperous Luoyang has long since collapsed, and the willows in those ten miles have been burnt to nothing but ashes."

　　 "The woman can't wait, she shaves her hair as a nun, and she lives next to the ancient Buddha in the blue lantern."

　　 "Years later, the general returned after going through wind and frost and found the ancient temple of Garan, but the sweetheart is no longer there. The old monk knocking on the wooden fish told him that someone had been waiting for him."

"Heavy rain fell down, grazing flutes lingering outside the city, and the general looked around. The old city was already broken, mountains and rivers trampled, and he shaved his hair as a monk, escaped into the empty door, and spent the rest of his life with the ancient Buddha in blue lantern, listening to the eternal rain ."

　　 When Hao Yun finished reciting the last word, the previously lively box was silent.

　　 Whether it was Director Tian, ​​screenwriter Wang, or Secretary Li, who had no ink in his stomach, they were all stunned.

　　 Is this a new edition?

　　 And in just one or two minutes?

　　 Wang Xingkai swallowed, unable to describe the shock in his heart in words, let alone contain the inspiration that gushed out of a fountain.

　　 Almost just after listening to the oral outline, a new script has already formed in his mind. In contrast, the one he wrote before is simply scum!

　　 This is the first time...

　　 is almost hanging!