Comprehensive comic editing: starting from the inventory of tears and collapse of fame

The Hokage Office, Naruto, who had become the seventh generation, was busy reviewing the documents that had just been sent.

Suddenly, a transparent curtain of light appeared in front of his eyes.

"Is this an illusion?" Naruto was a little curious.

He moved his gaze and noticed that the light curtain moved with it, and no matter where he looked, the light curtain was always directly in front of him.

Naruto was about to lift the illusion when a line of text suddenly appeared on the light curtain.

"Swimming Dragon Angelica Sea, the Sea Does Not Welcome Me Jiraiya"

Naruto was suddenly stunned, and long-lost memories emerged in his mind.

The plot of following the cultivation of the lecherous immortal is still vividly remembered, as if it is close at hand.

"Toad fairy ginseng on."

"Tadpole again, you're really not making any progress."

"Just by accompanying you, you should be grateful."

"When I can't find the answer, I will entrust you with the answer I am looking for."

"Let's eat this."

A popsicle was handed to Naruto's eyes.

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"What is it."

The drunken Tsunade was lying on the table, and there seemed to be a light curtain floating in his blurred vision.

There is a line of handwriting on it that seems to mention Jiraiya.

Tsunade burped and exhaled the wine, "I must have drunk too much when I saw Jiraiya's name."

On the side, Shizune was surprised to see the light curtain that suddenly appeared in front of him, and heard Tsunade mention Jiraiya's name, and his heart moved, and he hurriedly said: "Tsunade-sama, I also saw Jiraiya-sama's name."

"No need to comfort me." Tsunade waved his hand and slowly closed his eyes.

Almost at the same time, the entire ninja world, countless people's eyes, the same transparent light curtain appeared.

Sasuke, Kakashi, I Ai Luo, Kirabi, Terumi...

Most ninjas were alert at the first time, thinking that the enemy had launched a surprise attack, but when they saw Jiraiya's name, they were puzzled.

Why is the name of a long-dead person appearing?

"Jiraiya!" Orochimaru licked his lips, his voice hoarse and low.

He was interested in the light curtain that appeared in front of him, and even more curious about why the names of his former companions appeared.

He really wanted to grab the light curtain and study it well, but unfortunately he couldn't touch it, and the light curtain floating in front of him was like an illusory mirror, which could be seen but not touched.

Miaomu Mountain, the toad fairy couple was very excited.

"It's Kojiraiya, is there any message he wants to convey to us in the Pure Land?"

The big toad immortal opened his eyes, "Little Zilaiye, who is coming?" "

Not only the ninja world, but even those who live on alien planets are no exception, seeing the transparent light curtain.

"It can quietly invade me and wait."

"It cannot be traced back to the source, and it looks like a force of different time and space."

"Information from another world, interesting stuff."

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Tivat mainland, Liyue Port.

Traveler Kong completed his adventure commission and was about to go to the Hall of All Peoples with Paimon when something suddenly appeared in front of his eyes made him look stunned.

Paimon, who was floating beside him, said: "Traveler, how strange, a curtain of light suddenly appeared in front of my eyes.

"It's really strange, and I have it in front of my eyes."

As a traveler who wanders through multiple worlds, nothing has ever been seen in the void.

He really hasn't seen this before.

Paimon spread out his hands and muttered, "Who is it, I haven't heard of it?" On

the Qunyu Pavilion, Ning Guang asked the three henchmen around him, Baiwen, Baixiao, and Baizhi.

"Is there anything in front of your eyes?"

Bai Zhi nodded and said: "A light curtain appeared in front of my eyes, and it said You Long Angelica Sea..."

"Will it appear in front of some people's eyes, what is this thing?"

To be sure, this was not an oracle given by the emperor.

What kind of impact this thing will have on Liyue, Ning Guang can't judge for the time being, so I can only pay attention to Guan and wait and see.

Zhongli was leisurely drinking tea in the teahouse, and the light curtain that suddenly appeared in front of him made him put down the teacup in his hand.

This light curtain does not look like the power of heaven or the abyss.

In terms of general reason, they should not have that ability.

So, is it an extraterritorial force?

What is the intention of extraterritorial forces to descend here?

Inazuma, within the Pure Land.

The shadow opened his eyes and looked at the light curtain floating in front of him, his expression solemn.

It is too dangerous for this thing to be able to quietly break into the Pure Land of One Heart.

But she didn't feel any hostility.

What is this thing, what is the intention, Shadow is very curious.

Who is Jiraiya?

Let's observe for now.

"Mutation is an eternal enemy."

Outside, General Raiden tried to trace the source of this force, but in the end he found nothing.

Meru, Dao into the forest.

Collet was carrying out daily forest patrol work with Tinari, and suddenly a light curtain appeared inexplicably in front of her eyes, which made her suddenly startled.

"This... What is it? "

It looks a bit like a Void Terminal, but she doesn't use that kind of thing at all."

"Did you see that light curtain too?" Tinari looked back at Collet behind him.

"Yes, Master Tinari." Collet said.

"The power of the void can already penetrate into our eyes without the need for a void terminal?" Tinari whispered.

Lido Brahma College.

Lyra stared at the blank manuscript paper on the table, drowsy.

Suddenly, a translucent light curtain appeared in front of her eyes.

Lyra thought it was her hallucination, and she shook her head, the thing was still there.

If this continues, you can't write a thesis.

Forget it, let's take a nap.

Maybe when you wake up, it'll be a thesis.

Mond, Knights of the Zephyr.

Acting Commander Jean sat on the chair and rubbed his head.

"Have you been too busy lately and hallucinating?"

Seeing this, Lisa, the rose witch on the side, said: "Did you also appear in front of your eyes, a light curtain?"

Jean nodded and muttered, "It turns out that it is not an illusion, it can appear in the void in front of our eyes, what the hell is this?" "

The oracle of the wind god?

It doesn't seem quite like that.

"There is a device called the Void Terminal in Meru, and when you put it on, you can connect with the Void and gain knowledge, which is somewhat similar to that thing." Lisa said.

Qin was a little restless, and this light curtain could be quietly cast into their line of sight, and the danger factor was extremely high.

Not knowing its origin made her feel very insecure.

"It seems that the guard of Mondstadt will be strengthened."

The entire continent of Tivat, including the territory of the seven rulings, and even the abyss, whether it is people, immortals, gods, or even primordial demons, the same scene appears in the eyes of many living beings.

"It's chaos, you can't see anything." Mona used water to divine the origin of the light curtain, but to no avail.

"Similar to the Void Terminal, but it's not, it's really not easy to appear in front of my eyes quietly."

Compared to Sumeru's god-making plan, this unknown thing that suddenly appeared in front of him aroused the doctor's interest.

"What cannot be touched, as long as you open your eyes, you will be in sight." The Ice Queen sat on the throne, her eyes shining deeply.

"Is this a means of heaven?"

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Time light in the photo gallery.

Cheng Xiao took a sip of milk tea, looked at the person next to him and asked, "Lu Guang, what do you think of the things that appear in front of us."

Lu Guang interlaced his hands together, touched his chin, and said very solemnly: "I can only consider that a new supernatural has appeared, and the other party can send us a message in the void." "

This is Naruto's clip." Cheng Xiao said: "Why did you send us this thing?"

Lu Guang said that he didn't know this.

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The afterlife.

Yuri Nakamura saw the light curtain that appeared in front of him, and thought that he was hallucinating.

She shook her head sharply, only to find that the thing was still there.

"Is this a hoax of God?" Yuri Nakamura felt angry, even if he died, he would be fooled by God.

Wait, the god who hides in the shadows and wantonly plays with other people's lives, one day he must catch you out and beat you up.

Lihua tilted her head, her face full of doubts, she couldn't understand why this light curtain suddenly appeared in front of her.

Thinking is not her forte.

Forget it, let's go eat mapo tofu.

"Dare to disturb my rest."

The third king, the red king, Zhou Fangzun's body burst out of a flame, scaring everyone around him.

"Can't touch it, it's really unpleasant."

His flames penetrated the light curtain.

"Illusion?"

"No, it's not an illusion."

"Unknown power, huh."

"Jiraiya, Konoha's three Shinobi, would actually see that name in this world."

"Although I don't know what this energy light curtain is, it is used for entertainment."

Deidara, who has been in the afterlife for a long time, learned that there is no real death here, and that it will recover no matter what kind of damage it suffers, Deidara often plays the ultimate art - self-explosion.

Because the art was too dangerous, he was later imprisoned by the administrator of the area, Ichigo Kurosaki, Shinigami.

Life in the confinement room is boring every day, and the light curtain that appears in front of him now, although I don't know what it is, has finally made him find fun.

"This is?" L squatted in a chair, biting his fingers, staring at the light curtain in front of him.

It has been a long time since he came to the afterlife, and L has already confirmed several things.

This is not the world where the Grim Reaper is, there is no Death Note, there are few crimes in this world, and people can be resurrected after death.

Based on the above points, let him, the former world's number one detective, basically do nothing in this world.

The light curtain that appeared in front of him now aroused his interest.

Finding the source of the light curtain, he had a new goal at this moment.

"If you want to push this light curtain to the target's eyes, is it like Death Note, you need to know the name, and what it looks like."

"In this world, my name is never mentioned to outsiders."

"Does anyone have abilities similar to the Grim Reaper, you can see the names of others."

"Or maybe names and looks aren't necessary."

"Euler." Jotaro subconsciously summoned the platinum star behind the light curtain that suddenly appeared in front of him.

As a result, Platinum Star's fist penetrated the light curtain.

"Yale, Yale, is it a stand-in for the enemy?" Jotaro withdrew the Platinum Star and looked around, trying to find a substitute messenger.

"Madara, is there something in front of your eyes?"

The light curtain that quietly appeared in front of him aroused the interest between the columns.

Before that, he didn't even feel anything abnormal.

"Boring." Uchiha snorted softly.

It has been several years since he came to the posthumous world, and Uchiha has long since given up his former ambitions, and his greatest pleasure now is fighting with Pillars.

However, although he was bored on the surface, what was in front of him still made him a little concerned.

Being able to let both of them see this light curtain without him or the pillar being aware, the spellcaster is not strong.

"Zi Laiye, it's the disciple of Ape Fei." Thousand Hand Pillar scratched his head, why did that name appear on the light curtain?

In another area, a burly man with a crescent-shaped white beard is drinking with an old man with long white ponytail hair.

"Goo la la la ... I was able to quietly push things in front of my eyes. Whitebeard took a large bowl, drank the wine inside, and continued: "Brother Zilaiye, your name appears on it, but it shouldn't be your means, right?"

"It really has nothing to do with me." Zi Lai was also confused at the moment why his name appeared on it.

Swimming dragons angelica the sea, the sea does not welcome me to come.

When did he say such a thing?

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"Konan, Nagato, and I suddenly appeared in front of a light curtain with the teacher's name on it."

The sudden appearance of the light curtain in front of Yahiko startled Yahiko, but then there was an indescribable excitement.

Does the teacher, whom he had not seen for decades, send him any message now?

Yahiko has been in this world for several years, and he already knew that this was the world after death.

A year ago, he met Nagato and Konan, who also came here, and learned about their experiences.

After his death, Nagato and Konan, managed to escape from Hanzo.

Nagato inherits his will and becomes the leader of Xiao, but is eventually used by evil people, causing Xiao to become a tool of others.

In the end, Nagato, as the leader, voluntarily used the art of reincarnation to resurrect those killed by himself, resulting in his own death, while Konan, who was killed by those who used Xiao behind the scenes.

However, the two did not tell Yahiko that they had killed Jiraiya, and that it was Nagato who controlled Yahiko's body and killed it with his own hands.

Nagato and Konan, very tacitly, hid this matter, but now the two have a faint bad premonition, maybe Yahiko will learn the truth soon.

"We saw it too."

Nagato and Konan's hearts are very apprehensive, and the truth that Jirai was also killed is the last thing they want Yahiko to know.

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"Brother, for some reason, a light curtain suddenly appeared in front of my eyes, which said that the dragon travels to the sea, and the sea does not welcome me, what do you think?"

Curiously, Krru tried to poke her finger at the light curtain, and her finger penetrated through the light curtain.

"I see with my eyes." Ye Li said.

Hearing Krruru's words, he understood that the video that had just been delivered was successfully pushed.

Krru was a little speechless, this is complete nonsense.

Suddenly, she saw that the handwriting on the light curtain disappeared, and a picture began to emerge, and at the same time a voice sounded in her ears.

"Jiraiya Haojie Monogatari, this is a little more decent, the final chapter, the frog in the well scattered in the sea scroll..."

A white-haired old man with a black rod inserted all over his body gradually sank to the bottom of the sea, but a smile appeared on his face.

After seeing the scene that Jiraiya appeared, Naruto sat down weakly in his chair, was that the last experience of the lecherous fairy?

Tsunade, who was lying on the table, instantly opened her eyes after hearing Jiraiya's voice, and when that familiar face appeared in front of her, she felt that her eyes were a little sour.

This is definitely not an illusion caused by her drinking too much.

"Shizune, did you just say that you also saw Jiraiya, and a light curtain also appeared in front of your eyes?" Tsunade asked silently in confusion.

"Yes, Tsunade-sama." Mute replied.

Tsunade's face turned red and he muttered, "Playing Jiraiya's deeds, is this an illusion against us?"

"This is the scene where Xiao Zilai was also killed by Payne, why is there such a picture." The Toad Immortal couple was very puzzled.

When Yahiko saw Jiraiya's body sink into the sea, all his joy disappeared, replaced by grief and anger.

He couldn't help but clench his fists, who killed Jiraiya-sensei?

PS: I think the main focus of the inventory class is the audience, if you always put the original book it is too perfunctory, why not read the original book.

Therefore, I try to render the audience's reaction, basically play a little, it will transition to the audience, basically each audience interaction and video ratio is about 3:2.

If you don't like it, you don't have to continue to flip it.

Although playing a video and writing the reaction looks very fragmented.

But if you write two or three thousand words of the original work, or even a plot inventory, and then complain to the audience in one or two sentences, and there is basically no audience interaction in the middle, isn't it obvious that it has become a copy of the book.

What's more, where the picture is played, sometimes there are indeed people who have some opinions about this, such as Yahiko, Naruto, can they not miss it when they see Jirai, and they will be sent to death when they see Jirai, can they be indifferent?

But I can't finish that video before they react.

But I have to say that it is still simple to write like that, a large number of copies of the original work, a small amount of writing reactions, no need to think.

As it is now, it is still a troublesome thing to bring in everyone, and it is still a troublesome thing to think about the reactions and interactive plots that should be made in that period.

Even because the plot is not played much, it is easy to transition to the audience and lead to reading fragmentation.

I know this, but I am still used to the current way of writing, and even many audience reactions I added later, there are several pictures that were originally only two thousand words, and I supplemented the audience reaction interaction, supplemented to three or four thousand words, or that sentence if you always put the original book is too perfunctory.