Comprehensive comic editing: starting from the inventory of tears and collapse of fame

This is what Virus Control I wrote

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[-Usopp declares war on Luffy in order to obtain the Melly, but in the end he loses and is knocked to the ground by Luffy.

"Idiot, how could you possibly beat me."

After the roar, Luffy picked up the straw hat that had fallen on the ground.

"The Melly is at your disposal, we will search for new ships and continue sailing."

"Goodbye Usopp, I've been happy all the time."

Former partners, parted ways. -】

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"Rosalia: The ship just now seems to be crying, has it become ejaculated?" - Tivat.

"Kelly: Kelly also found out, it's really curious." - Tivat.

"Rokudō: Is it really interesting to have a ship that gave birth to autonomous souls?" - Tutoring the world.

"Hercules: Usopp, didn't you see that ship was crying because of you?" - Pirate World.

The picture of the Melly shedding tears was seen by many people, and everyone felt incredible that a ship could cry.

——Digital World——

Yagu Beast bit his palm and asked Yagami Taichi beside him.

"Taiyi, didn't that ship cry just now, is that ship also a Digimon like us?"

"Probably not." Yagami Taichi shook his head and said, "That's probably just a ship that gave birth to a soul.

"The other world is really strange, a ship can give birth to a soul." Yagu Beast said.

"In comparison, you Digimon are more peculiar." Yagami Hikaru hugged the Dilu Beast and smiled slightly at the Yagu Beast.

In a certain bar, Yamato Ishida drinks alone.

"Although I think that a fight between partners can promote friendship, but those two guys are too ruthless, then where is a fight, it is clearly a fight."

"Hit a partner so hard, can it still be considered a partner, even the ship cried."

"The ship is crying, how can the ship cry? Is that also a life? "

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——Tutoring World——

Lark Kyoya did not find any trace of the six remains, and as time passed, he gradually realized that the light curtain that had just appeared in front of his eyes did not seem to be the masterpiece of that guy.

After realizing this, he suddenly felt that this light curtain was much more pleasing to the eye.

The lark lay on a tree and summoned a light curtain, he wanted to see what this light curtain was and what its intentions were.

He saw a long-nosed fight with a rubber man on a light curtain, and he saw a ship floating on the sea, leaving tears in his eyes.

"The fighting style of those two people doesn't look like people from this world."

"And there is no such thing as a crying ship in this world."

Suddenly, he saw another message sent by the six skeletons, saying that the other world was really interesting.

The light curtain in front of him really did not come from the hands of the six remains.

Tutoring the world ten years later, the Avengers prison.

The six remains are held in a water prison, and although their whole body is blocked and they cannot move, they still remain conscious.

Idle and bored, he regarded the light curtain in front of him as a pastime.

He found his name floating across the light curtain, which piqued his interest.

"Is that me in other parallel space-times, or me in other timelines?"

The Six Remains of this era also tried to send a message, but found that it could not be sent.

"So that's the case, all the time, space and time period, I only have one chance to speak."

"It's a pity that you can't effectively probe the information of the other world."

"The ship that can cry, the rubber man whose body can be lengthened, is really a bit of a concern."

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- Pirate World -

Straw Hat Pirate Ship.

Sanji spat out a smoke ring and muttered, "None of us found out at that time, Meli he cried."

Usopp clenched his fists, his expression a little lonely, and his heart was a little uncomfortable.

At that time, the battle between him and Luffy, Melly looked at it all, and shed tears of sadness.

He didn't want to give up on Melly, but because of his choice, it made Melly very sad.

"I'm sorry Melly, I'm sorry Luffy, I know the result, but I can't accept it, if only I could calm down at that time, and I wouldn't make Melly sad."

Jinping walked to Usopp's side, patted him and said, "Don't blame yourself anymore, with the guy you care about Meli so much, Meli must be very happy." "

The Melly, it's a pity that I couldn't travel with him." Brooke sighed on the sidelines.

On the red-haired pirate ship, the red-haired Shanks shook his wine glass and said to Beckman next to him: "The ship that Luffy was riding on just now cried, so it is said that the ship elf was born."

"O ship elf, although I have heard of it, I have never seen it." Beckman said, "It seems that Luffy and they have a deep relationship with that ship." On

the empty island, the war ghost Wa Yipa, commented: "Even the shock shell was used, that guy is really fighting with his companions with the determination to die." "

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——The world after death——After eating

, Lihuaxuan did not leave the academy cafeteria, and she looked at the light curtain in front of her with a dumb expression,

a little unclear.

Does the ship in the picture have life?

Can't figure it out.

Suddenly, there was a commotion outside, and Lihua walked out of the college cafeteria.

It's the posthumous group of guys on the World Front who are doing things again, and they seem to be wooing a girl.

The girl looked about her age, with a ponytail on her right side and clothes that resembled badminton.

At this time, the girl who was drawn by the posthumous world front looked a little dazed.

She should have been completely erased from the world tree, which is equivalent to her never existed in this world, but why she is really here at this moment.

Her feelings, her body, the people around her, everything was so real, as if she were still alive.

There was a light curtain in front of him, playing the story of a group of pirates, and it was obvious that it was not the Void Terminal.

There are also people around her who invite her to join the afterlife world front.

So, is this the world after death?

Beyond the distant territory, thunder and flames are intertwined.

Raiden Jin, who was fighting with people, said to his opponent in front of him: "Himeko, let's end our discussion here."

She looked into the distance and said to herself, "I feel the breath of the old man." "

Dead man." Infinite Tower Himeko sighed softly, it has been several years since she came to this world, she has not learned any news of the deceased, and she is somewhat lonely.

"If you want to see the deceased, go there." Jiko said.

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[-On the light curtain screen, the night is gray and drizzling.

A man heard a knock on the Hulk Island, and walked in to see that it was the Melly, which had now become an abandoned ship, lying alone on the Hulk Island.

"It was destroyed by the gods of water, it was really miserable."

This person is none other than the mayor of the water capital, the president of the shipyard, and the iceberg.

"No, was there a problem before." The iceberg gently pushed the shattered plank with his hand.

Suddenly, he looked startled and surprised, and heard an incredible voice.

"I want to sail, I want to sail once."

Iceberg covered his head with one hand and glanced at the Melly, clearly understanding the source of the sound.

To fulfill the wishes of the Melly, he began to carry out repairs for the Melly alone.

"What the hell are you doing, it's obviously a ship that has no hope."

Perhaps in the eyes of the iceberg, the Meli's desire to sail again was an unfulfilled wish, but in the midst of the wind and waves, he heard a word of thanks.

Then the unmanned ship actually took action on its own, facing the wind and waves, and sailing into the distance.

He is going to save his companions, he can take everyone on another ride, he is going to send them to safe seas. -]

On an airship, Vivi wiped the tears from the corners of her eyes and looked stunned.

"Melly, did it give birth to a soul."

After a moment, she showed a relieved smile again, "Yes, if it is them, it seems that it is not unusual for a ship spirit to be born on that ship." "

The Melly gave birth to a soul." Koya was surprised that it was the ship she had given to Luffy, and during her journey with the Straw Hats, souls had been bred.

The butler Melly was excited, he had heard about the ship elves, which only existed in legends.

But now, he has seen with his own eyes that the ship he built gives birth to a soul.

"After all these years, I finally met the ship elves, and that's the ship I built." The housekeeper Melly is very proud.

But then he was a little lost, he knew that the Melly had been abandoned, and the next was the final voyage of the Melly, and when the Straw Hats were saved, the Melly would complete his mission and fall into a lonely sleep.

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Broken for so long, I am guilty... Open more.

I feel that it is better to take stock of the battle, and there is no need for any cause and effect to write only the battle scenes.

This kind of moving, writing less plot will become inexplicable, but writing too much feels very perfunctory.

It was originally written that after the battle with Usopp, the Straw Hats were wanted, and then Usopp met Franky, after which the two joined the Straw Hats and fought CP9.

But this will become very long, so it will be deleted all, and now it will cause Usopp to leave, inexplicably become a sniper king and appear on the straw hat ship, and Franky, who was originally an enemy, inexplicably became a teammate.

Although the big handsome knows what happened between the readers better than the reader, those characters who watch the video do not know, and they feel a sense of disconnection.

If the inventory class is copied according to the video, it feels insincere, so I try to write a paragraph and turn the perspective, but this will also cause incoherent reading and be more difficult.

And just simply writing the reactions of other characters will also be very watery, not to mention that normal people will basically not have those strange thoughts and reactions when watching videos.

Therefore, I try to add some plots related to the character when the character reacts, but this feels that the problem is bigger, obviously I am taking inventory, and the result is not many words, so I move to other places, and I don't know how to balance it at all....