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After hanging up his trousers, Byakuya wrapped his shirt around his waist to prevent Fatji, who was soaked with water, from being exposed to Kasumigaoka Shiu’s sight.

Then Bai Ye turned around and wanted to sit on the bench to rest for a while. At this moment, he found a notebook placed on the bench.

Seeing this, Bai Ye sat down and picked up the notebook:

“Is this yours, Shiyu?”

Bai Ye raised her notebook and asked Kasumigaoka Shiyu.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu also calmed down at this time. She felt that Bai Ye’s behavior just now was intentional.

He could have told her directly to hang the clothes, but he didn’t tell her until he arrived. , obviously he wanted to see her embarrassed.

“Hum, it contains a girl’s diary. Hantai Yejun doesn’t have the habit of peeking into other people’s diaries, right?”

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu crossed his arms, snorted coldly, and said

“Well, there really is.”

Bai Ye nodded, and then opened the notebook in his hand.

Looking carefully, Bai Ye found that this was not the girl’s diary mentioned by Kasumigaoka Shiyu at all, but the setting of a light novel.

Bai Ye frowned slightly, and his eyes quickly The ground was swept across the notebook.

Seeing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s face showed a hint of joy, and after reaching Bai Ye’s side, he said:

“How about it?”

As if she wanted to get Bai Ye’s praise, Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s eyes were full of expectation.

“Well, the writing is very good and the characters are rich, but the plot is too bland and poor.”

Bai Ye still looked at the notebook with a calm tone.

Hearing Bai Ye’s evaluation, Kasumigaoka Shiyu also put away the smile on her face.

It was not because Bai Ye said her book was not good, but because the evaluation Bai Ye just said was different from hers. The editor of Machida Enoko made the same evaluation.

They all recognized her characters and writing style, but they all said that the plot was bland, even a little boring, and suitable for reading when sleeping.

It was so coincidental that she could say the shortcomings of her book and Loophole, Kasumigaoka Shiyu believed that Bai Ye definitely had some accomplishments in literature, which made Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s curiosity about Bai Ye even higher.

“So, does Mr. Ye have any suggestions?”

Kasumigaoka Shiyu asked, with sincere eyes and some expectation in her expression.

She believed that Bai Ye could find the loopholes in her book in such a short time, so she would definitely give key suggestions, and maybe she could make her book better. Resurrection from the dead and avoid being cut in half.

But this is just an expectation. After all, her editor Machida Enko didn’t have any good suggestions for her book. She also predicted that Kasumigaoka Shiu’s book would be cut in half in three volumes.

“Well, Shiyu, your writing is very good, but the plot is bland. People don’t like to watch this kind of smooth love, where a man loves a concubine. Then it’s better to get married directly. What kind of love is there?”

“What people want to see is the intertwining of emotions, the entanglement of choices, and the choice between left and right.”

“There are no choices at all in the plot of this book. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is close from beginning to end, so you can consider introducing a third party to trigger the plot to make the plot ups

and downs and heart-wrenching.”

What Bai Ye said, Kasumigaoka Shiyu silently remembered it in her heart.

But when she heard Bai Ye said that she wanted to add a third person to the book, her heart trembled and her brows wrinkled slightly.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu substituted herself into this book. Yes, deep down in her heart, she was unwilling to write about a third party intervening in this relationship.

Bai Ye glanced at Kasumigaoka Shiyu, and seeing the other person’s expression of confusion, he continued to speak:

“This is just a suggestion, Shiyu, just listen to it as appropriate.”

“Yes, I know.”

Hearing Bai Ye’s words, Kasumigaoka Shiyu nodded.

After returning the notebook to Kasumigaoka Shiyu, Bai Ye looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu. When he saw that the other party was looking at the notebook in his hand and was slow to speak, he took the initiative and said:

“By the way, am I not rewarded for making suggestions?”

“What reward does Ye Jun want?”

Hearing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu narrowed his eyes and looked up at Bai Ye

“let me see….”

Byakuya touched his chin. He said that the reward was just to stop Kasumigaoka Shiyu from thinking about changing the character. This kind of thing cannot be forced. If you insist on adding characters and modifying the plot, it will become a mess.

Bai Ye glanced up and down at Kasumigaoka Shiyu, and for a moment he didn’t know what kind of reward he should ask Kasumigaoka Shiyu to give him.

Otherwise, bite? No, no, if you say it, you will definitely be considered a pervert!

Or, let Kasumigaoka Shiyu kneel in front of her and call her….No, no, it’s off track.

Just when Bai Ye was thinking about what reward Kasumigaoka Shiyu should give him, Kasumigaoka Shiyu rolled his eyes and smiled at the corner of his mouth.

“Lord Ye~”

Kasumigaoka Shiyu called Bai Ye’s name softly. Bai Ye turned his head when he heard the voice. Just when he was about to ask Kasumigaoka Shiyu what happened, Kasumigaoka Shiyu suddenly attacked him.

“Well!”

After a long time, Kasumigaoka Shiyu stood up and looked at Bai Ye with a red face:

“This is Lord Ye’s reward~”

Bai Ye looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu blankly. He didn’t expect Kasumigaoka Shiyu to be so proactive.

Bai Ye reminisced about that feeling. It seemed that it felt good.

And Kasumigaoka Shiyu smiled. Looking at Bai Ye and seeing that Bai Ye was still silent, she tilted her head and put a finger on Bai Ye’s lips:

“Thank you Mr. Ye, it was a big help.”

Hearing Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s words, Bai Ye felt his heart tremble.

“Shiyu….”

Bai Ye opened her mouth gently, and just when she was about to speak, she saw Kasumigaoka Shiyu looking up at the sky

“Hey, Yejun, I like you!”

Inexplicably, Kasumigaoka Shiyu suddenly spoke.

Baiye looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s profile and was stunned, and then smiled:

“I also like Shiyu.”

Bai Ye doesn’t know what his feelings are for Kasumigaoka Shiyu, but every time he is with Kasumigaoka Shiyu, he always feels relaxed. Maybe this is the so-called love.

“I’m really happy that Yejun likes me!”

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu turned to look at Bai Ye and smiled.

With a charming smile, this scene was fixed in Bai Ye’s eyes…….

Please forgive me. Chapter 35:

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