After writing, Qian Sanbao looked at the outline, but was a little dazed.

  "Not satisfied with the outline"

  "Of course, this outline is not bad, but is it really okay to fight monsters like fantasy novels? I feel that the repetition rate is very high. It's like a game, and all the plots are only slightly different."

  "What do you think? Do you think that online novels are difficult to write? In fact, the most difficult thing is not writing or anything, but changing your writing habits. Don't always think that writing online novels is almost the same as physical novels, they are all layers of plots. Progressive, to give the reader a sense of hierarchy and clarity.

  The things you wrote in the past meant that you wanted to write everything together, but instead, they were mixed together, giving the reader an unclear feeling. After reading a few chapters for a while, who would want to continue reading.”

  "Is that so?"

  "Yes, for fantasy novels like this, the most important thing is to have a clear system and advanced understanding, and those should have their own characteristics. Mastering these points is to repeat each detail, and simply create an atmosphere. This kind of novel Don't you like to read it

  "I seem to understand!"

  "As for this novel, I'll just name it Dou Po Cangkong for the time being. The specific content is similar to what I discussed with you at the beginning. Write this kind of waste wood and get out of marriage, keep the writing style, and follow the outline step by step. Just write."

  "Then the outline is finished"

  "It's simple, just change the 500-word outline a little bit, and the next plot will be done over and over again, until you don't want to!"

  "Uh, brother, this is really good"

  "Listen to me! If you can't make money with basic writing and plot, I'll give you money! However, if your book is popular"

  "Brother Ran, don't worry! If my book is really popular, even if there is income, I will give you 70% of the income, and you will also account for 70% of the subsequent adaptation and copyright!"

  Qian Sanbao said, raising his hand as if to swear.

  Zhang Fan waved his hand gently and said with a smile, "Don't swear, just write it slowly yourself, but since you promised it, then I'll accept it!"

  "Why don't we sign a contract or something?"

  Qian Sanbao asked if he wanted to.

  "You don't need it, you can give this money as you like. When you want to give it, give me a call and I'll just tell you your bank card."

  Zhang Fan said slowly.

  "Yes"

  Qian Sanbao looked at Zhang Fan gratefully.

  Zhang Fan is so confident, what can he not believe? Zhang Fan also promised to give himself 150 yuan per month for living expenses for the first three months of writing this book, which can ensure that he has nothing to lose. I am anxious to write this book.

  three months.

  Enough to see the book's grades! Others have been helped quite a bit too.

  The person who had been drinking with Zhang Fan before was introduced to the actor director by Zhang Fan. In the past two days, through the one from Feng Xiaolan's crew... the director of the crowd met several actors and directors, and there was no shortage of opportunities.

  These guys in the group renting house were originally people who had perseverance but no chance. After being introduced by Zhang Fan, they worked harder and more seriously.

  In the last two days of the star experience program on Huaxia TV, Zhang Fan was walking around comfortably, looking at the customs of Hengdian, had nothing to eat, and strolled the pedestrian street. .

  Fortunately, a few days ago, the material has almost been shot.

  therefore.

  On the penultimate day of the show, the program team specially gave Zhang Fan a day off and did not follow up.

  Early in the morning.

  Zhang Fan got up early, dressed in a white coat, and came to Mochou Lake.

  ran two laps.

  Zhang Fan was refreshed, and he practiced Tai Chi in a well-mannered manner to cultivate his body.

  Um.

  Zhang Fan is liking the life of this salted fish more and more.

  Although he was filmed by the show crew a few days ago, the show crew didn't interfere too much with his life, and Boss Yang knew that Zhang Fan was involved in the show, so other things didn't bother him.

  The ears are clean.

  Happy life.

  This is the true meaning of salted fish. No. 16, the lake breeze is refreshing and the morning sun is warm.

  There were no people under the rows of willow trees, and the waves were sparkling. As the temperature gradually increased, the dense lake surface gradually disappeared.

  Since the system is in place, his proficiency in many abilities has increased exponentially.

  It's like Zhang Fan's body at the moment.

  There has been a big change from a week ago. The fat on the body, especially the fat on the abdomen, has greatly disappeared. Now it can be called fat, not like the previous...fat! The face is even thinner, If you shave off your beard, you will look far less than thirty years old, many of them will be twenty seven or eight.

  It can't be said to be small fresh meat, but it is still no problem to say that it is old fresh meat.

  Mental state and physical fitness are also getting better.

  Mochou Lake is not small.

  It takes one or two kilometers to go down in a circle.

  Zhang Fan ran for a lap or two, the speed was not fast, he just panted slightly, and he didn't even sweat.

  It wasn't like he was panting and sweating when he moved a little.

  "It's a pity! I wasn't reborn in the world of martial arts that I read in the novels, otherwise, with this system, I'm afraid I'd become a superman now!"

  Zhang Fan stood by the lake and said quietly.

  but.

  Also good.

  At least a lot of fighting has been avoided, and everyone is living in peace. Although this world is as chaotic and turbulent as the earth wars in the past, China, as a world power, is relatively peaceful, but the borders are a little disturbed.

  But all of this is completely out of Zhang Fan's scope of consideration.

  At least in Zhang Fan's view, he is very satisfied with the current living situation.

  "I don't know how strong I am now. Try it!"

  Zhang Fan suddenly became whimsical.

  After more than half a year of training, I can clearly feel that my body is much stronger than before. Although it is not like those in fantasy novels, it is still much stronger than ordinary people.

  He thought for a while and looked at the hill in the distance.

  Beneath the hill is a dense forest.

Chapter [-] Encountering Long Xiaoyun in the Jungle! (Please subscribe! Second update!)

Second more! Walk to the small jungle.

  There are fewer people here, and the cool breeze blowing from the mountain forest is more deserted.

  deep.

  He found a pine tree, stood up, took a deep breath, and clenched his hands into fists.

  This tree grows slantingly, and the mouth of the bowl is thin.

  Bang! Zhang Fan punched out! Crack! In Zhang Fan's stunned eyes, the tree with the thickness of the mouth of the bowl actually cracked! Boom! Zhang Fan punched out! The place where Zhang Fan hit was directly broken into two pieces! "Yes!"

  Zhang Fan suddenly showed a smile, and his heart was ecstatic! Unexpectedly, he could knock down such a big tree with his full force. If he continued to practice, could he really become a superman? Zhang Fan even thought, Don't look for a knife to cut your skin or anything.

  However, he squeezed the skin with his hands vigorously, and a feeling of pain immediately came.

  have to.

  It seems that it is impossible to become a superman, he is just an ordinary body.

  Regardless of

  how.

  Zhang Fan was still very happy.

  Although Zhang Fan in the past could not be said to be unable to carry it on his shoulders or carry it with his hands, but if there was a conflict or something like that, Zhang Fan would never have dared to deal with it, at most he would have called the police.

  With his own skills, he felt a lot more timid in his heart.

  Just when Zhang Fan was thinking about going back to the rental house, there was a sound of footsteps on the path not far away.

  Zhang Fan stood aside with his hands in his arms, and quickly saw who was coming.

  Two came.

  One was a tall and straight old man, looking to be in his sixties or seventies, with a national face and knife-edged eyebrows. Even if he didn't say a word, he could still feel the kind of heroic force that... unconsciously radiated from him.

  Behind him was a young girl.

  the strange thing is.

  The girl seemed to be wearing an army uniform, an army green shirt and camouflage sweatpants, and followed the old man in a hurry.

  Gee.

  The girl looks so handsome! That's right.

  The girl has short hair and looks like a boy from a distance. If you look closely, you can tell that she is a woman. No way, this guy's capital is too much! But it's not that kind of... He has feet, but maintains the beauty of a tall and straight body in a military style, and with that body, this feeling makes it hard to squint.

  And her face is very delicate.

  Those eyes were even more deep and bright, looking left and right, but with faint vigilance.

  Zhang Fan stared at the girl motionless.

  soon.

  The girl noticed Zhang Fan.

  She looked at Zhang Fan's saliva that was about to come out, and couldn't help feeling disgusted. She glared at Zhang Fan fiercely, only to find that Zhang Fan was not afraid at all, instead, the appearance of touching his chin was a little more wretched.

  Wretched old man! The girl muttered in her heart.

  The two walked down the path in front of Zhang Fan.

  Zhang Fan rolled his eyes and waved his hand: "Beauty, stop for a moment."

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