I asked you to write about a fisherman, and you wrote about Gao Qiqiang on the spot?

【I'll go, this is so well said, and it feels so powerful once you hear it!】

【Just like the image, it feels gentle and elegant!】

【This is the black man in my mind! Gentle, restrained, and steady, but with thunderous means and decisive killing!】

【It definitely feels like a godfather! 】

At this moment, Ni Yongxiao appeared on the stage, and the live broadcast room was filled with excitement.

……

Jury room.

Xiao Sa:"The boss is coming!"

Chen Sicheng:"To be honest, I like Ni Yongxiao!"

Shu Ping:"If this script is really a series of movies, then in the first part, Ni Yongxiao is definitely the most important character , if Lu Chen can write him well, this script will be at least half successful."

Yan Gelin:"That's right! At least for now, this character is very charming, as quiet as a virgin, and as dynamic as thunder. I'm looking forward to this character's success. Characterize!"

…… off screen.

Hong Kong Film Office.

The review team also narrowed their eyes. Just by Ni Yongxiao's few simple monologues... a stormy momentum swept through everyone's hearts!

……

Now, in the room, the conversation continues...

Lu Chen:"It seems that you are very open-minded, Mr. Ni."

Ni Yongxiao:"It's better to be open-minded. It will make life easier, otherwise you will be like A Ren, so tired."

Lu Chen:"He is a policeman."

Ni Yongxiao linked his fingers (classic style):"Forget it, let's not talk about this. Let's talk about what you want to talk about. Ah Ren should have told you about our Ni family."

Lu Chen :"I also chatted with Sir Huang.……"

Ni Yongxiao raised the corners of his mouth and nodded:"Huang Zhicheng. Then you should know more."

……

【There is a sense of bossiness between the lines!】

【A good batch, Ah Xiao!】

【I can even see his contemptuous smile!】

【He is indeed a man that even Lu Chenju would call Mr. Ni.】

……

Lu Chen:"When we talked about how you wanted Ah Xiao to go back and help with the family business, and when we talked about your daughter's birthday, Ah Ren said you wanted to kill the five bosses."

Ni Yongxiao nodded:"That's right."

Lu Chen:"Why do you want to kill Guohua and the others? Four years have passed, and besides, they are not the murderers of your father?"

Ni Yongxiao:"97, many things have to change, and our Ni family is the same. Killing is a thing of the past. If things don't change, our Ni family won't be able to survive well in the new era."

Lu Chen:"I understand, you want to clear your name!"

……

【It turns out that what Ni Yongxiao just said about changing the fate of the Ni family was to clear his name!】

【Otherwise, I would have guessed it was a whitewash.】

【It would be wrong for a person like Ni Yongxiao not to want to clear his name. He is extremely smart and educated.】

【Since ancient times, those who want to clean up their innocence rarely end well, and those who succeed are even rarer.】

【It’s not easy to clean up your innocence, and you can’t even do illegal business.���Okay, isn’t that enough?】

【He looks like a little brat at first glance】

【I guess no child over the age of twenty-five would say such innocent things nowadays.】

【Indeed, the moment Ni Yongxiao thought about clearing his name, his ending was already doomed】

【The Ni family is so big, I guess they have been busy cleaning up their reputation in the past four years.】

……

Lu Chen:"Just because of this, you want to kill five of them?"

Ni Yongxiao:"Dealing with Han Chen is different from dealing with Guohua and others in Guohua. They are destined to leave the Ni family and establish their own mountain gate, but in their hands Most of the resources and land belong to the Ni family. I can't just watch my father's foundation fall into the hands of a few outsiders. In that case, I will be sorry for my father and the Ni family.

I will not allow this to happen."

Lu Chen:"No wonder Huang Zhicheng warned Han Chen not to be too loyal when working for the Ni family."

Ni Yongxiao:"I gave them a chance, but unfortunately they didn't take it. They were too impatient and wished that our Ni family would leave Xiangjiang as soon as possible."

Lu Chen :"What do you mean."

Ni Yongxiao:"On my daughter's birthday, I told them that before 1997, our Ni family wanted to immigrate. From now on, we would only do serious business. All the previous businesses were left to them, just as a thank you, provident fund That's fine."

Lu Chen:"They all agreed?"

Ni Yongxiao:"They've been waiting for this day for a long time."

Lu Chen:"I understand, your move of retreating in order to advance is actually just waiting for them to take the lead. If they Will you still kill them if I want to keep you?"

Ni Yongxiao shook his head:"Your hypothesis was overturned four years ago."

Lu Chen:"Yes. What about Han Chen? He is loyal to your Ni family, I believe it. In the past four years, you have been able to secure this position. He has done a lot of work, but you also want to kill him?" Ni Yongxiao:"Although it was Huang Zhicheng's instigation, my father was killed by his wife. I had no choice. Han Chen has such a good relationship with his wife. If I want to kill his wife, he will definitely fall out with me. I can only strike first."

Lu Chen:"I'm afraid Han Chen never dreamed that one day you would want to kill him. He trusts him so much. Him."

Ni Yongxiao:"If you come out to fool around, you will have to pay back sooner or later. Achen believes in Buddhism and knows about karma. I believe he can figure it out."

……

【How cruel!】

【Yes, no matter how polite you are on the outside, you are still a dark person on the inside.】

【With the Ni family's style, to be honest, it's no wonder that Guohua and others have their own ideas. They are all smart people, not stupid】

【The worst thing is Han Chen. He wants to be loyal, but the worst thing is himself. His wife has a fatal knot.】

【It’s really not a good thing for a woman to be too ambitious. Sometimes she tends to do bad things.】

【agree!】

……

Lu Chen:"You wanted to immigrate, did Han Chen advise you at that time?"

Ni Yongxiao nodded:"Of course……"

……

Storyboard transition.

In the living room.

Han Chen:"Mr. Ni, do you really want to leave? There will be chaos if you leave."

Ni Yongxiao:"Achen, you believe in Buddhism, it's easy to pick up but hard to put down. I can let go today, you should be happy for me.

I have thought about it for you. From now on, it will definitely be a world of cocoa powder. The four of them will ship it in small packages from South America. It will not make a difference. I have already discussed it with Taiguo and let you exclusively import it from now on. When the time comes, you will be the big banker and everyone will listen to you.

In two days, you can go to Taiguo to complete the procedures and you can start when you come back."

……

【Awesome! Breaking sound!】

【Damn it! This storyboard is so cool!】

【Ni Yongxiao is so handsome!】

【It's easy to pick up but hard to put down. Sure enough, the gangsters are not scary, but the gangsters are educated!】

【It would be strange if Han Chen didn't get fooled by this line!】

【This look and tone are so godfather-like!】

【Ni Yongxiao is so awesome, he is calm and steady with his strikes!】

……

Jury room.

Shu Ping took a breath:"The audience is right, this Ni Yongxiao does smell like a godfather, and he is a true oriental godfather!"

Yan Gelin's eyes flashed:"You brat! I thought Gao Qiqiang should be him The best villain ever designed! Unexpectedly, another Ni Yongxiao came."

Chen Sicheng:"It feels like Gao Qiqiang is a bit far behind him.……"

……

Xiangjiang Review Room.

Liu Weiqiang:"This Ni Yongxiao is indeed very unique in his design! It is different from the common villains in police and gangster movies!"

Wai Ka Fai:"I have written so many police and gangster movies, but there is no character who has such a strong impact on people as Ni Yongxiao! This The boy's creative ability is really terrible! Whether it is the character design, matching plot, plot, or image, they are almost impeccable."

Chen Kexin:"It seems that this script is really going to bring us enough surprises!" in Zhuang Wenqiang, who is one of the top three screenwriters in the industry in Hong Kong, smacked his lips:"It looks really good at the moment, but it would be too early to say that it is what the superiors want to save the theme of police and gangster films in Hong Kong. There is a huge gap. It depends on how he designs Ni. The duel between Yong Xiao and Han Chen."

Liu Weiqiang:"Don't rush, take your time, Han Chen's character is still too early to be darkened."

Sunglasses King:"If you really want to reach the height envisioned by your superiors, just rely on your current level. This script is far from adequate."

The review team nodded.

Chen Kexin hit the nail on the head:"A truly top-notch work needs to be supported by top-notch story ideas. At least for now, this work has no such signs. It just focuses on the heart of the characters and describes the characters in a more complex way.. Maybe this will be a good work, but compared with the top works, it is not worth discussing together at the moment."

"That's right."

The members of the review team nodded again.

……

And now.

In the room, the conversation continued... (To read Baoshuang novels, go to Feilu Novel Network!)

Lu Chen:"It's a lie that you asked Han Chen to go to Taiguo to discuss business, but it's true that you let him die."

Ni Yongxiao:"Death It's better to die in the hands of a Taiguo guy than to die in my hands."

Lu Chen:"That's right. After talking about the five of them, let's go back to A-Ren. A-Ren said, you are holding this birthday party to find out who is guilty. Damn it, did you already suspect him then?"

Ni Yongxiao:"After all, he went to the police academy."

……

【���Clean answer!】

【Ah Xiao is really good!】

……

Lu Chen:"So you wanted to find out A Xiao and confirm whether he was an undercover agent?"

Ni Yongxiao smiled:"I have never been short of undercover agents. Besides A Xiao, I also suspected someone. Since the police set up a trap for me, I Just use the trick and set up a game for them"

……

【Set up a trap for the police?! Handsome cried!】

【awesomeness!】

……

Lu Chen:"How did you do it?

" Ni Yongxiao:"Before the birthday party, in front of Ren and another undercover agent, I tore up a sticky note and threw it into the trash can. There was a date written on it, and I knew they were going to look for that note.

Lu Chen:"A note?" What was written?

Ni Yongxiao:"A date, 14."

Lu Chen:"14!" ?"

……

【Damn it, isn’t 14 the anniversary of Ni Kun’s death?!】

【Yes, it's the anniversary of Ni Kun's death. Could it be that Ni Yongxiao wants to take action on that day?!】

……

Jury room.

Shu Ping:"The breaking point is right here!"

Yan Gelin and others opened their eyes wide.

What game is Ni Yongxiao going to play?!

…… inside the room.

Ni Yongxiao:"I told Aren that next week, on the 14th, I have a very important business that I want to take him with, and he agreed. If he is an undercover agent, he will definitely tell the police the news. They will come to arrest me."

Lu Chen:"That's right."

Ni Yongxiao:"Later I told another person who was suspicious of this matter. One day in advance, I changed the time and set it on 13th night. , take him and Aren with you........."

Lu Chen:"You mean, if the police come to arrest you on the night of the 13th, you can be sure who is the undercover? Because Chen Yongren only knows from the sticky notes that it is Operation 14, even if he is with you Even if he set off too suddenly, he would not have time to tell the news. Only one other person would have time to notify the police."

Ni Yongxiao smiled:"Clever!"

……

【Damn it, Ni Yongxiao is so scary!】

【Such IQ! It's like playing with people in the palm of your hand!】

……

Yan Gelin:"This Ni Yongxiao is so awesome. I can't even imagine how Han Chen used to win over him!"

Chen Sicheng:"The IQ is top-notch! The mind is top-notch! This Ni Yongxiao is so brilliant!"

……

Lu Chen:"What happened after that, was that person exposed?"

Ni Yongxiao:"On the night of the 13th, on the night of the transaction, the police came as promised."

Lu Chen:"The transaction was also fake, right?"

Ni Yongxiao:"He came to trade. The two foreigners were just hired by me to act. There was no white powder they wanted in the suitcase, only a box of video tapes. A box of Huang Zhicheng's video tapes."

Lu Chen:"Huang Zhicheng?"

Ni Yongxiao said, no No hurry:"On the 13th, I asked Han Chen to go to Taiguo.

His wife Mary guessed my purpose and thoughts and wanted to inform Han Chen in advance.

At that time, Han Chen probably didn't believe it and insisted on going to Taiguo despite Mary's objection..

If my guess is correct, Mary probably didn’t tell Han Chen that she killed my father before he boarded the plane.

It was probably after Han Chen got off the plane that Mary told him, so Han Chen was alert and took the initiative.

Kill the Taiguo guy I arranged to meet and escape.

"

Lu Chen:"What about that video tape?"

Ni Yongxiao:"When Mary saw Han Chen getting on the plane, she went to find Huang Zhicheng in desperation. She was friends with Huang Zhicheng. In fact, the two of them made an appointment to talk in the hotel. In fact, I had already sent people to install cameras in the entire hotel, and I recorded their conversation."

Lu Chen:"What did they say?"

Ni Yongxiao:"Mary confided the fact that Huang Zhicheng instigated her to kill four years ago. She also said that for Han Chen, I must be eliminated, otherwise Han Chen and she would not survive. I have to admit that Han Chen married a very good man. She is a very smart wife, but she is too smart."

Lu Chen:"Then what did Officer Huang promise?"

Ni Yongxiao:"Remove the police who are following me around so that Mary can take action."

Lu Chen:"Later, Mary took action."?"

Ni Yongxiao:"I sent a motorcycle killer to give me a cold shot, but fortunately I have Aren. If he hadn't knocked me down in time, maybe Mary would have succeeded.""

……

【Damn it, Chen Yongren still can’t let go of family affection after all】

【It must be instinctive】

【At this time, Chen Yongren should be very confused. Is my body honest? I still don’t want my brother to die.】

【Such complex human nature】

……

Lu Chen:"So you set up this trap to go after the undercover and Huang Zhicheng, and by the way, you also dealt with Guohua, Gandhi and the others. Wait, I understand! You want to do it on the evening of the 13th? Go on, use an undercover agent to create the best alibi for yourself, and then use this series of actions to honor your father?!"

Ni Yongxiao handed over his fingers and continued to nod and smile.

……1.7

At this moment, the live broadcast room was stunned for a moment, and then exploded on the spot.

【I go! Ni Yongxiao, this is too outrageous! Find the undercover agent, use the police to create an alibi for yourself, use the video tape to bring down Huang Zhicheng, and also kill several people from Guohua. Kill three birds with one stone! The key is that you still pick it cleanly!】

【Is it like the police failed to arrest Ni Yongxiao, but instead helped Ni Yongxiao? Is that what you mean?】

【Yes, that’s what it means!】

【Ni Yongxiao is so cool!】

【It’s Lu Chenjuku! Isn’t this Lu Chenju’s idea?】

【This plot is really amazing! Too explosive!】

【It really exploded!】

…… this moment.

Even the judges on the review team were shocked!

From the beginning of the previous birthday party to the end of the whole paragraph, it seems that Lu Chen wrote it very easily.

But this plot, whether it's logic, characters, or reversal, is all perfect.

Wei Jiahui:"This plot is really well written!"

Chen Kexin was amazed:"Ni Yongxiao will definitely become a classic villain. There is no doubt about it!"

Liu Weiqiang:"I am very curious now, what title will Lu Chen give to this work? What kind of name would you like to add the finishing touch?"

Sunglasses King:"I'm also very curious."

…… inside the room.

Ni Yongxiao:"Actually, you guessed 1, 2, and 3, but you still didn't guess 4."

Lu Chen:"4 has another purpose?"

Ni Yongxiao:"This 4 is Ah Ren.……"

……

【Oh my god, Ni Yongxiao is so handsome!】

【Always filial but not benevolent, just for filial piety!】

【Lu Chenju is so incredible, he really created a godfather! An Eastern Godfather! ]

PS: Friends who have seen this should be able to accept this writing method. I just want to say that if the story of"Infernal Affairs" must be really written clearly and clearly, this method is the most suitable. I'm really not showing off my skills. The key is that I don't have any skills to show off either.……