My Cartoonist Guide

　　 Wang Wenhong was surprised.

Shen Xin's answer was unexpected by Wang Wenhong.

Many people in the editorial department have not seen "mangafly", but Shen Xin not only knows about "Slam Dunk", but also recommended this comic to him, which shows that Shen Xin has also read other comics while drawing "Soul of the Game".

"Don't show this expression, I only saw it accidentally. Yesterday Maning bought "mangafly". I looked through it while eating. Then I checked Yu Chuanyao's information." Shen Xincong The seat stands up.

"How? Isn't it... not bad?" Wang Wenhong asked.

"You have asked so, the quality of this comic must be guaranteed. Have you eaten yet? I still have fried buns here." Shen Xin asked.

Wang Wenhong touched his stomach and was indeed a little hungry.

Shen Xin went down to the first floor and took out a transparent bag of fried buns from the kitchen. It was slightly cold, but it did not affect the consumption. He also handed Wang Wenhong a can of Coke, "If you don't have beer, just take it."

"It doesn't matter, I'm not a drunkard." Wang Wenhong opened the Coke, took a sip, and his fatigue was lessened. "Mr. Shen, what do you think of "Slam Dunk"?"

"You know, why do you ask me?" Shen Xin stuffed a fried bun into his mouth.

"To be honest, I think "Slam Dunk" is very powerful. Haruka Tamagawa deserves to be the rookie king of last year. By the way, the editor of "Slam Dunk" in "Mangafly" is Yan Fei."

"Sister Yan?" Shen Xin was taken aback, then shook his head, "It turns out that's the case."

"I want to ask Mr. Shen, do you want to make changes in "The Soul of Chess"?" Wang Wenhong asked.

"What do you mean?" Shen Xin asked rhetorically.

"You are a little shameless, obviously I asked first." Wang Wenhong said in a bad mood.

"But you didn't say that I can't ask." Shen Xin smiled.

"It's really hard to serve you." Wang Wenhong sighed and was silent for half a minute, organizing the words in his heart, "I...I thought about it for a long time on the way here. To be honest, although I haven't said it yet, I can see it. , He felt the pressure from "Slam Dunk". After "Slam Dunk" was released, "Top of Basketball" was forced to transfer to another issue, which is enough to see that "mangafly" attaches great importance to this comic, and "icfuture" is the only The sports cartoon that can compete with it is "Soul of Goss". I have watched "Slam Dunk". To be honest, after watching "Slam Dunk", my heart can't be calm for a long time. I think this is a passionate comic..."

"So, your opinion is..."

Wang Wenhong took a deep breath and looked firm, "Mr. Shen, please keep your current style."

"This is not the same as what you said just now." Shen Xin squinted and stared at Wang Wenhong.

"That was what I thought at the time, but you also know that I have to take the subway for more than an hour to get here from Jiman Bookstore? I am also calmer. In fact, this is related to the sports chosen by the two comics. The characteristics of basketball It is youth and passion. Go is about being immobile and testing the players' hearts. If Go is sweating like a basketball, then it is not Go."

"I think so too. However, "Slam Dunk" is not that simple." Shen Xin sighed, stood up, and walked to the workbench where the notebook was placed. "You know the rhythm of the first episode of "Slam Dunk", why is it so? Fast?"

"Why?" Wang Wenhong wondered.

Shen Xin found a web page and put the notebook in front of Wang Wenhong.

This is a web page similar to Weibo. A cartoonist sent a message.

"What does this mean?" Wang Wenhong didn't understand Japanese.

"I don't know either." Shen Xin shook his head, then asked Xiang Maning sideways, "Ma Ning, what does this mean?"

"That sentence is'Thank you Huaxia editor for the suggestion of the first chapter. After the revision, I am very satisfied with the first chapter of "Slam Dunk".'" Ma Ning explained casually.

"I heard what you just said, that'China Editor' should be Sister Yan...So, "Slam Dunk" is not easy." Shen Xin folded his arms around his chest.

Online novels pay attention to the "Golden Three Chapters". In fact, they write out the conflicts of stories in as short a length as possible to attract readers.

"Slam Dunk" undoubtedly uses this technique. In addition, the ending of the first episode is just right, just singled out the team's stars. Readers have full expectations for the next plot.

I remember that when writing online novels, an author once said: "A good chapter does not stop abruptly, but the meaning is still unfinished."

Obviously, the first chapter of "Slam Dunk" was out of context and did this.

Wang Wenhong frowned, his expression solemn.

"However, although the plot of "Slam Dunk" is good, there are also problems." Shen Xin thought for a while and said what he thought.

"What's the problem?" Wang Wenhong asked puzzledly.

"Painting skills." Shen Xin explained.

"Painting skills?" Wang Wenhong flipped through "Slam Dunk" again.

To be the rookie king in District 11, Yuchuan Haruka painting skills should be no problem.

"No need to look for it. His shortcomings in painting skills are made up by the sub-mirror... It's like writing a novel. The novel is detailed and appropriate, but if it is usually written in detail, it suddenly becomes vague in some key places. It means that the author may not understand the content of that aspect. The first episode of "Slam Dunk" is also, look at the 1v1 segment of the protagonist and the star of the team..."

Wang Wenhong immediately turned to the last few pages of the first chapter.

"The character's language, the close-up of the expression, and the character's lower limb confrontation are all included. The only exception is that he did not dribble or dribble. It shows that there is a certain lack of dynamic sketching... By the way~www.NovelMTL.com~ There is one thing. Go requires close-ups of the opponent's parts, as well as basketball, especially when shooting and dunking, the close-ups of the hands are more complicated than those of Go. In the first chapter, these contents are not shown."

After Shen Xin's reminder, Wang Wenhong also noticed this.

"So, there is still an advantage in "Soul of Chess"?" Wang Wenhong said in surprise.

"It's hard to say, you forgot. The cartoonist has an assistant. Whether it is close-up of the hand or the action of the character, it can be completed by the assistant. Therefore, the score of "Slam Dunk" will not be affected. Then again, "Slam Dunk" The performance of "Basket" has nothing to do with me at all. I only need to paint "Soul of Chess" well."

Wang Wenhong took a deep breath, and then smiled, "I really think too much. Since Mr. Shen is so confident, I must go all out to make "Hire of the Game" one of the best-selling comics in the country. By the way, "The Soul of the Game" "The single-line book first printed 300,000 copies. The editor-in-chief said that two pages of promotional color pages are needed. I want you to prepare it and I will pick it up on weekends."

"300,000 copies? Will it be too much? The atmosphere of Go is not very good now." Shen Xin said in surprise.

"Not much. I believe that within a week, 300,000 copies will be sold." Wang Wenhong was confident.

"When?"

"August 7."

"Oh, Xiao Han was here too... By the way, do you need my help?" Shen Xin asked.

"No need." Wang Wenhong took a deep breath and grinned, "You only need to draw a good cartoon, and I will do the rest."