My quadratic is absolutely abnormal

Forty-Six: You Are Not a Veteran Driver at All

“Well, let me take a look at the sketches you drew before. I remember you said that you have submitted drafts to comic magazines. Can you show me?”

“It’s all here.”

Bang! The black cat took out a thick stack of drawings from the desk. The number of these drawings combined was already less than the number of novella comics.

Su Jie reached out to take it, and under the nervous gaze of the black cat, he flipped through the pile of drawings one by one.

…

Half an hour later, Su Jie raised his head from the pile of sketches, and met the uneasy eyes of the black cat.

“How is it?” The black cat bit its pink lips slightly, hoping that its works would be recognized by others. This is what every cartoonist hopes to achieve.

Su Jie shook his head, and said, “Although I don’t want to hit you, your comic storytelling is too poor.”

what!

The black cat suddenly stood up!

“And your drawing method is also problematic. In your comics, the chin of every character is drawn too sharply. This kind of stereotyped drawing method and character shape is difficult to attract readers’ attention.”

“Always use purple and black to draw a dark world. This style is actually not pleasing. Even if you want to create a dark world, you can’t just use two colors like this…”

“There are also……”

After pointing out the problems of the drawing one by one, Su Jie saw that the black cat’s face was getting worse and worse, but he still managed to finish the sentence. Although the words were not pleasant, it was the truth.

Having experienced the prosperous era of comics in his previous life, Su Jie can easily judge whether a comic is good or bad with the eyes of later generations, not to mention that Su Jie has a brain with countless data and comics comparisons, making it almost impossible for Su Jie to judge error.

“However, your basic drawing level is still passable. As long as you can change it, you may not be unable to successfully publish your own comics.”

When Su Jie concluded at the end, he gave Hei Mao a little confidence. Hei Mao’s painting level was about the same as Su Jie’s, and worse than the professional H manga teacher Ying Lili.

Manga emphasizes storytelling. If you can write aA good story, everything else is minor issues.

For example, “One Punch Man” that Su Jie is currently painting, in the hands of ONE, the original artist of the original earth, is to attract readers with stories. Murata Yusuke redraws and begins to embark on the road to serial success.

It can be said that storytelling is the core premise of comics. Su Jie’s painting level cannot be said to be very high, that is, it can be achieved. However, because of the good storytelling of “One Punch Man”, it was able to be successfully published in “Weekly Shonen Jump” Get serialized.

“Change…” The black cat’s eyes slowly lit up, and Su Jie’s analysis hit the nail on the head. The black cat is not afraid of being criticized, but afraid that no one will pay attention to his work. Seeing that no one cares about his hard work, this is the ultimate painfully.

“Yes, change. Let’s start from a small place. You are too one-sided in the modeling of the characters, and the sharp chin has limitations.” Seeing the black cat humbly asking for advice, Su Jie touched his chin, got up and took the pen and paper: “I’ll draw a few characters, and you can compare and see the results.”

Just saying it is not convincing. In order to let the black cat understand his mistakes more clearly, Su Jie has to use his real skills, which is… plagiarism.

The pencil sketches quickly on the manuscript paper, and each plump and independent character image jumps onto the paper, and the pencil quickly takes shape as Su Jie turns.

These anime characters drawn by Su Jie are mainly based on slightly rounded chins, and the shapes of the characters are more varied and rich, and they will no longer live in the traditional triangular faces with pointed chins. Such face divisions can not only make the characters more three-dimensional and rich, It also allows many hairstyles to be matched with reasonable face shapes, which is also the trend of comics after the 21st century.

The black cat’s eyes widened slowly, seeing Su Jie easily draw several anime characters with independent shapes, one can imagine the surprise in his heart.

“This is the gap.” The black cat thought silently, listening to Su Jie explaining while drawing, eager to try.

“Come and try.”

Su Jie handed the pen and paper to the black cat, pointing out the points that need attention. It is not difficult to change the painting method, as long as you practice more, you can always succeed.

The rare thing is the construction of the story. This thing is very talented. If Su Jie didn’t have a brain with a super memory, it would be very difficult to conceive an excellent comic story.

Time is passing fast, Su Jie taught Black Cat in all aspects, first of all, to change some bad habits of Black Cat, such as the dark style of drawing comics, the shape of the character with a pointed chin, and the design and development of the storyline .

Su Jie taught the black cat everything he knew and understood. Of course, time is limited and it is impossible to finish it all at once. Su Jie just selects the key points to explain.

All kinds of information about ACG are recorded in the brain, and Su Jie selected some information related to comic writing from it, and recounted it to the black cat.

A few hours later, Su Jie looked at the drawing in his hand. On it was the character that the black cat learned to draw. He had initially changed the drawing method of the pointed chin, and the chin became round. This is already great progress.

In the future, I will practice more and learn relevant design experience, and I will always be able to draw the characters well. Su Jie also takes advantage of plagiarism, and there is no need to think about the characters at all, because there are ready-made works in his brain.

The hour hand was already pointing to half past ten. Su Jie saw that the black cat had made a lot of progress, so he bid farewell.

“Come here first today, I will come again when I have time.”

“Thank you, senior.” After the teaching of Su Jie, the black cat now respects Su Jie very much, and thinks that Su Jie is at the level of a master. These few hours of teaching have benefited the black cat a lot, knowing where to make changes , It is much stronger than learning blindly.

Su Jie waved his hand and was about to open the door to go out. After twisting the doorknob, the door was pushed, and two villains immediately rolled in.

“Hyuga, it’s you again.” Seeing Hinata Wugeng with a troubled expression, and Zhuxi Wugeng with a cute and innocent face, the black cat immediately became angry.

Su Jie was also a little speechless, and said, “I’ll call you the Gossip Queen from now on, Hyuga Gossip!”

“You two are bullying me together, Zhuxi, go play with my sister.” Wu Gengri pouted his little mouth, knowing that he had provoked everyone’s anger, and grabbed his sister Wu Geng Zhuxi’s little hand and wanted to run away.

“Did I let you go? Su Jun, please allow me to deal with the housework.”

The black cat extended its evil claws to Hinata again. With Hinata’s screams of “Ahhhhhhhhhhhh”, the old driver overturned the car again.

“At the age of eleven or twelve, it’s just a toy car! You’re not an old driver at all.