My quadratic is absolutely abnormal

Ninety-Three: Three Thousand Words

The second floor of the villa!

Su Jie stood in the corridor, and did not see Ying Lili.

Click!

The door of one of the rooms opened, and Ying Lili, who heard the sound of footsteps going upstairs, stuck her head out of her room, looked at Su Jie and said, “Why are you following me!”

“Come up to see the scenery.” Su Jie pretended to look around.

“Don’t talk like me, where do you go for a view?” Ying Lili rolled her eyes and saw Su Jie standing in the aisle without moving, her face was slightly red, she opened her mouth, and finally mustered up her courage and said, “Come in… Come into my room and sit down.”

Boys are generally not allowed to enter girls’ boudoirs, except for those who are very familiar with them. Su Jie obviously obtained this qualification.

“Hey, that’s really embarrassing.” Su Jie said so, but walked over directly, seeing Ying Lili was speechless for a while, originally arrogant, she wanted Su Jie to refuse, so she would go along with the flow, but in the end Su Jie He came in without any hesitation.

Stepping into Ying Lili’s boudoir, the room layout here belongs to the standard home girl’s nest, there are many kinds of anime stickers and figures, the soft big bed is covered with pink quilts, and on a thick wooden table, there are many The painting tools and paper are obviously Ying Lili’s workbench for painting.

Although there are a lot of things in the room, they are kept spotless, and the things are arranged in an orderly manner, making it look tidy and warm.

Stepping into it, you can still smell a faint fragrance, but Su Jie can’t smell what it is.

“I thought the room would be chaotic.”

Su Jie sat on a stool and said, generally housewives don’t like to clean up the room, it seems that Ying Lili is obviously different.

“Of course, I love cleanliness.” Ying Lili said proudly as she threw herself on the big soft and elastic bed.

“Well, I can see it.” Su Jie nodded, looked around the room, and then looked down at the desk, where Ying Lili studied and painted.

In addition to books, paper and pens, there are also some drawn cartoons on the desk.

Su Jie couldn’t help but took out one, and all the things that were imprinted in Su Jie’s eyes were unsuitable for children.

The bold style of painting, the storyboard with a sense of action, the beautiful characters, and the just-right but exciting plot that makes people can’t help but watch.

Su Jie said that he is very good and powerful. Even in the eyes of Su Jie, a gentleman who has read countless H comics in his previous life, the 18* forbidden fan comics drawn by Ying Lili can be regarded as good.

“Don’t watch.” Ying Lili was shocked when she saw this scene, she swooped over and snatched the drawing paper from Su Jie’s hand, she blushed so much that she could boil eggs, it would be embarrassing for Su Jie to discover this kind of cartoon have to.

“What’s the matter, this kind of thing is normal!” Su Jie felt that it should be taken for granted. If it weren’t for these spiritual food, how would those lonely teenagers spend the long night.

“It’s just a normal ghost. I said you can’t read it. You still reach out? I bit you.” Su Jie wanted to reach out for other notebooks, but Ying Lili immediately stopped him and refused to give it to Su Jie. Look again.

“Your way of thinking is very dangerous! Manga are drawn for people to read. What’s the point if people don’t read manga.” Su Jie said righteously, wanting to go around.

“Damn it, can this kind of H manga be the same?” Ying Lili angrily bumped her head at Su Jie, refusing to get out of the way.

“Why is it different, there is no difference, okay? Then why can’t I read it when others can read it? Anyway, I am also a cartoonist. How about I give you an after-view after reading it?”

Su Jie refused to give up, and continued to seduce Ying Lili, trying to convince her.

“What’s the aftertaste, hooligan.” Ying Lili blushed. She didn’t expect Su Jie to be so shameless. After watching H manga, she could see the aftertaste.

“What is hooliganism? It’s called respect for knowledge. Any knowledge should be respected. We can’t discredit some knowledge because it is misunderstood. For example, works like H manga. How much help has the guiding light provided for the growth of young people, we should respect such works, what’s wrong with the after-viewing, one article is not enough, I can write two or three articles.”

Su Jie was extremely displeased with Ying Lili’s contempt. He felt that how could such a great work be associated with the word hooligan. This is an insult to knowledge.

Ying Lili couldn’t say no to Su Jie, and finally stretched out her hand to push Su Jie away, showing her small tiger teeth and said, “It doesn’t matter, you have a lot of nonsense, anyway, these cartoons can’t be shown to you.”

“Don’t draw conclusions in advance! You even called my teacher, the teacher is pointing you! I don’t read these H comics for myself, but to help you find out the flaws and inadequacies in the comics. You Only when you realize your mistakes can you create better works in the future!”

Su Jie really has the ability to give advice to Ying Lili. Based on the number of books that Su Jie read in his previous life, the so-called long-term illness makes a good doctor, and a long-term view makes him a good teacher. Su Jie feels that he has two talents in this regard.”Really?” Ying Lili looked at Su Jie suspiciously, as if trying to figure out the truth of Su Jie’s words.

“It’s absolutely true, more real than real gold.” Su Jie immediately made a promise.

It seems that Su Jie hasn’t read the book after traveling for so long, and finally saw one that caught his eye. He had to revisit it. Ying Lili couldn’t stop Su Jie.

“Then… Then I can only read one book.” Ying Lili struggled for a while, and finally let go.

“You still have a lot of books.” Su Jie was pleasantly surprised when he heard what Ying Lili said.

“There are not many, I just draw when I have time.” Ying Lili grabbed the corner of her clothes, drew circles on the ground with her toes, and lowered her head in embarrassment, proving that she definitely did not devote herself to the creation of H manga, but just drew casually because of her hobbies Yes, but I don’t know that there is no silver three hundred taels here.

“You have to persevere in your hobbies to be rewarded! I believe you will be successful in the future. In the future, you will be the best seller at doujinshi exhibitions.”

“Hey, can you stop talking?” Ying Lili wished that there would be a crack in the ground to get in. She never thought that when Su Jie said such things, he could still treat them with a normal heart, as if he was talking about where to eat today Same, isn’t he a bit embarrassed?

“Okay, I won’t talk about it, but I’ll take a look at your work first, and then I’ll give you a post-viewing comment.”

Su Jie knew that too much was too much, so he quickly stopped this topic and asked Ying Lili for the notebook.

Yinglili may have participated in doujinshi exhibitions to promote her own H manga works, but at those times, she was facing strangers, and Yinglili could still deal with it with the mentality that everyone did not know each other. Anyway, after the book was sold, both parties It will disappear into the vast crowd, and no one will meet anyone.

But Su Jie is different. As a friend and acquaintance, it is a completely different feeling to show Su Jie the book he created.

Thinking of this, Ying Lili began to regret it. If she showed Su Jie the H manga she drew, and then met Su Jie and mentioned this matter in the future, it would be so embarrassing!

Su Jie saw Ying Lili’s hesitation, and knew that it would be too late if he didn’t seize the opportunity, so before Ying Lili could speak, he quickly made a move, picked up a bound book from behind Ying Lili, and quickly walked away .

“That’s all for this book. After reading it, I will give you a review. I will do what I say, and I will guarantee that the review will be more than 3,000 words.” Su Jie laughed, clapped the book in his hand and said.

“Three thousand words? Are you going to write an H novel? Why do you need so many words?” Ying Lili was dumbfounded. How much should there be in three thousand words? She doubted whether Su Jie could write it.

“Three thousand characters are not much after reading, and it’s not enough for a book created with heart.” Su Jie said, walked to the seat and sat down, found a comfortable position to read the book and enjoy, oh No, it was to find out the shortcomings and deficiencies in the book, and to give Ying Lili tips and rectifications. Su Jie did this entirely for the good of Ying Lili, but there was no selfishness in it.

Ying Lili’s painting level is really good, the book is very beautiful, the use of various drawing methods and techniques is no worse than that of ordinary cartoonists, but the story is not very good, fortunately, the book is mainly for action scenes, what about the plot of the story? It’s just an adjunct.

While watching, Su Jie also asked for a pen and paper from Ying Lili, and after reading a page carefully, he would write something on it. Su Jie did not lie to Ying Lili, he really wanted to write three pages. A thousand-word review.

Ying Lili was sitting next to Su Jie. Seeing Su Jie watching with relish, she felt more and more wrong. Why did she feel that she was being tricked by Su Jie, a big liar.

That expression, that lip-smacking movement, it’s all because I’m immersed in the book!

I guess they all regard themselves as the protagonist of the book, but I still think what he said is true.

But the deal is done, the raw rice has been cooked, Su Jie put his arm under the notebook to prevent Yinglili from snatching it, so he won’t be afraid of Yinglili snatching it back.

Ying Lili covered her face, not daring to look at the contents of the book. When she thought that Su Jie could see all the things she drew, Ying Lili felt shy and her heart beat a few beats faster.

Su Jie wrote the impressions while reading. Ying Lili took a sneak peek at the impressions and found that what Su Jie wrote was well-founded, from the style of painting, storyboard, plot, role assignment, including certain actions The detailed interpretation of the play, and how to make a book more attractive, Su Jie wrote on it, it is definitely a review that can score full marks, but Ying Lili thought that the reference object of this review is herself In the drawing book, the little blushes are just like Huoshaoyun.

Time was passing by slowly. When Su Jie finished reading the entire book, the impressions he wrote down were definitely more than 3,000 words, and even a lot more.

In this regard, Su Jie was not ambiguous about Ying Lili at all, and gave his most authentic and appropriate suggestions. I believe that after Ying Lili absorbs this knowledge, she will be able to create more excellent book works.