Pushing martial arts horizontally: starting from predicting opportunities

In the new year, I wish you all a happy new year and may your family be healthy. In the new year, may everything go smoothly and may you have a bright future.

On the first day of the new year, there will be an update of 15,000. I hope everyone can have a good mood on the first day of the new year.

Thank you all for your support.

I got the update badge 14 days after it was put on the shelves, so it should be considered a hard-working type.

Update 210,000 words, more, but because the quotation keeps falling, I estimate that the income is only two or three thousand.

To sum up, I still feel that I am not very good at writing this kind of fantasy upgrade article. I think that the writing of fighting and training should be okay (it may be an illusion), but there are some deficiencies in the preparation of early conflicts and the creation of villains, which has caused everyone to It doesn't seem like it's enough to be happy.

The definition of this book at the beginning is not actually a Jidao article. The title of the book was chosen by the editor. It was actually good in the early stage and has not been changed since then.

Let’s talk about the plot and setting problems. As for the plot, it was still because of the previous problems. After the fight, there was no follow-up, and then new conflicts were created, which led to a poor perception. The events were obviously connected together, but Because of the lack of reactions, or shock, from all parties, the story seems to be scattered.

That is to say, it is common for everyone to hit the small ones, get the old reactions, and then return to the old matryoshka pattern. I didn’t write well. I focused too much on rhythm and conflict. The villain was thrown away after use, but the follow-up villain’s response was missing. The story is incomplete. It was fine in the early stage. When I wrote that the villain should have become stronger and would not make such mistakes, but I ignored this and the content was not coherent.

Thinking about it now, that kind of nesting doll is much better than my current writing method, and it will be more refreshing and sufficient.

Since the publication of the book, there have been very few readers, and there have been very few positive comments in the book review section. But it is a dish, and there is nothing you can do about it. The writing is poor, and you can see it in every aspect.

In addition, there are some poisonous points in the plot, but there is no way to change it, so I can only write it down.

In fact, the toxic points like family members are not completely useless. Some people say it's bullshit, and some people say it should be an orphan. What's even more outrageous is that they killed the protagonist... but at least no one said it was written by AI. (wry smile).

Next is the setting. The biggest failure is the setting of Senxuan Realm. I shouldn’t put Mortal Transformation and Senxuan Realm in the same realm. I was worried that people would say that I had the word count of Water Realm, so I forcibly compressed the realm.

Thinking about it now, these things that should not be saved are really difficult to compress.

As for the five realms, there should be fewer people talking about water.

By the way, there is also the bloodline setting. Since I wrote this, I will definitely have a complete explanation. It is not just to suppress the protagonist. There will be a joint explanation later.

All in all, at least for now, this book has been destroyed by me, which is a bit embarrassing, but there is nothing I can do about it. It is the first time I have written this type of upgrade novel, and it is not very good. I will try my best to improve it in the future.

It seems that I haven’t thanked anyone since I started the book.

The following is the reward list: 100 points for the lonely man in the distance,

Ordinary, reader 100 points,

Tongtian Cult Leader Lingbao Tianzun 100 points,

FEIYU100 points,

Youth is always bound to hit a wall 700 points,

Tomb Sorrow 500 points,

Kim Taehyung’s score reached 1,000 points,

From now on, do not see, write or disturb 100 points,

Greedy bookworm 92634727/100 points,

Really not, fake 101 points,

rs100 points.

Thank you all for your tips and subscriptions, thank you.

There are a lot of words about monthly tickets. Qidian’s background data is cleaned regularly, so it’s a bit hard to check. Sorry.

Finally, I hope everyone can subscribe. After all, the purpose of writing books is to make money. It’s not shabby to admit that you are just an online beggar.

In fact, a large part of Qidian’s income comes from recommendations, and recommendations depend on follow-up subscriptions.

The follow-up is really bad, the 24-hour follow-up is even less than 200, I cry to death.

In the new year, I hope that everyone will be happy and healthy, and have abundant financial resources. Those who support books can open a custom subscription, which can be regarded as a follow-up subscription, so that the book can be recommended in the C library in the new year.

Thank you all again.