Rebirth of the Flying Era

   Chapter 144 Jin Ping Mei and Journey to the West

  Zhu Ting nodded shyly, bit her lip and said, "Look." After speaking, she turned around and went back to the small office.

  Du Fei thought it was interesting, took a sip of hot tea, and opened Miss Zhu Ting's manuscript...

   At this time, Zhu Ting was in the small office. From time to time, she stretched her neck and looked out. She found that Du Fei was reading her manuscript, and her heart skipped a beat for no reason.

   Section Chief Qian sitting opposite, still holding his copy of "Xianji Arsenal", glasses under the bridge of his nose, seeing Zhu Ting's appearance, he joked: "Girl, have you recruited Du Fei again?"

   Zhu Ting was stunned for a moment, then glared at Section Chief Qian and said, "What do you mean by recruiting him! The old comrade should pay attention to his words when he speaks."

   Section Chief Qian laughed and said: "Girl, you said to your heart, do you like our little Du?"

   Zhu Ting immediately made a big red face: "Comrade Old Qian, what are you talking about!"

   Section Chief Qian pouted and said deliberately: "There is no best! Let me tell you, girl, little white faces like Xiao Du have no good intentions..."

   "Comrade Old Qian! I'll be angry if you talk nonsense again." Zhu Ting tried her best to sullen her face, but the blush on her cheeks revealed that she was obviously lacking in confidence.

   "Alas~" Qian Ke let out a long sigh, imitating the tone of Peking Opera's chanting bai: "Aiya~ Zhong Yan is against my ears~ ah!"

   Zhu Ting glared at him again.

   Outside, Du Fei read several pages at a glance.

  Should I say it or not, Zhu Ting's handwriting is really beautiful! The font structure has just entered, the strokes are sharp, and the charm is full.

   In comparison, Du Fei's handwriting is much worse.

   By the time of the lunch break, Du Fei had already read most of the novels written by Zhu Ting.

  As someone got up and walked out, he also raised his head and stretched.

  Zhu Ting came out of the small office and said, "Hey~ what do you think?"

  Du Fei nodded and said, "Sister Zhu, your calligraphy is really good!"

   "Who asked you this..." Zhu Ting was stunned for a moment, and immediately reacted, with a pair of beautiful Danfeng eyes staring at the boss, and said angrily: "Tell me well, don't be weird, my novels are really so bad?"

   Du Fei comforted: "Actually, it's not that bad, at least the punctuation marks are used correctly."

  Zhu Ting was instantly furious, her fists were clenched tightly, and she could not wait to go up and hammer Du Fei.

   However, she still had to maintain her leadership image in the unit, but she still gritted her teeth and said, "Du Fei, you'd better explain it to me! What's wrong with my novel? Otherwise..."

   Du Fei instantly felt a murderous aura, but his head was very firm, and he pouted: "This is what you told me to say, don't cry later."

  Zhu Ting took a deep breath and resisted the urge to strangle Du Fei: "You say it!"

   As a young literary woman who graduated from Yan University, this **** in front of him even questioned his literary dream!

   is tolerable or unbearable!

Du Fei didn't rush to eat at all, and said in a leisurely manner: "First of all, the hero, what is this unfortunate name? Zhan Taiming, why don't you just call it Zhan Taiming? Why do you choose such a rare compound name? What's the use of dyslexia? I still explain to people many times in the book, my surname is Zhan Tai, not Zhan, is it embarrassing?"

  Zhu Ting has a flat mouth.

   Du Fei added: "And that murderer, why did he make such a low-level mistake as soon as he opened the board? It's not like an experienced enemy spy at all. Can the protagonist defeat such an enemy, can he show the protagonist's power?"

   Zhu Ting was a little speechless.

  Du Fei continued: "Think of Professor Moriarty in Sherlock Holmes! Powerful, insidious, cunning, fierce! That's the temperament that a villain boss should have."

   At this moment, Zhu Ting's little fist could no longer be clenched, and she asked without confidence: "Is it really that bad?"

  Du Fei couldn't bear to see her pitiful appearance, so he calmed down and said, "Sister Zhu, be confident and remove that '?'."

  Zhu Ting blinked before she realized, "You... **** me off!" Then she reached out and grabbed the book on Du Fei's desk.

  Du Fei hurriedly held it down and said with an apologetic smile: "Hey~hey~ Sister Zhu calm down, you calm down!"

  Zhu Ting took a step back, her face flushed instantly, and she didn't care about grabbing the book, she pouted, stomped her feet, turned around and ran away.

  Du Fei reached out and touched his elbow, thinking to himself, "Fuck, it's really unfathomable!"

   After thinking about it, he picked up the manuscript paper on the table and followed.

   In the courtyard, Du Fei took a few steps and caught up with Zhu Ting, hehe smiled and said, "Sister, why are you really angry."

  Zhu Ting's cheeks were still slightly red, she glared at him, saw the manuscript, stopped and stretched out her hand: "Give it back to me!"

  Du Fei said: "Don't tell me! I haven't finished it yet!"

  Zhu Ting hummed: "What else are you looking at, it's worthless by you."

  Du Fei said: "Why is it worthless, the description of the scene is really good! From far to near, from near to far, there is a sense of picture, and the rhetoric is quite gorgeous, worthy of being a top student at Yanda University."

  Zhu Ting slumped her eyelids with a 'you're lying' expression on her face.

   Du Fei laughed: "Don't stand here, let's talk while walking."

   After finishing speaking, Zhu Ting didn't care whether he agreed or not, and walked forward on his own.

   Zhu Ting stood awkwardly for a second, but followed.

  Du Fei waited for her to walk to the side, did not tease the boring child any longer, and said seriously: "Sister Zhu, this is your first time writing a novel, right?"

  Zhu Ting gave a "hmm".

"Actually, as a beginner, these faults in your novels are nothing." Du Fei continued: "If you can get into Yanda University, your composition must be good, and your poetry and prose should also be good. But what is the difference between novels and these? In the same way, the essence of a novel is to tell a story, as long as the story is explained clearly and wonderfully, and the words don’t need to be gorgeous, it can still be an excellent novel.”

  Zhu Ting pouted and asked, "Then how can you tell the story well?"

  Du Fei said concisely: "In order to be fascinating, you must have ups and downs."

   "Ups and downs?" Zhu Ting frowned.

   Duffy paused, waiting for her to think for herself.

   Zhu Ting thought for a while and said, "You mean the plot has twists and turns?"

  Du Fei nodded: "Just like the scene in "Jin Ping Mei" where Ximen Qing married Li Ping'er..."

   "Bah~" Zhu Ting's cheeks turned red again, and she raised her hand and slapped Du Fei's arm fiercely: "Don't study well! What a broken book to read."

  Du Fei pouted, thinking that you haven't read it and know it's a broken book?

   However, he also realized that he was a little confused, and changed his words: "Then "Journey to the West" three dozen white bone spirits is a typical ups and downs."

  Zhu Ting fell into thinking.

  Du Fei said: "Go back and take a good look at the three dozen white bone spirits, and change the plot of your novel to that model, and see if it's much better."

  Zhu Ting has listened and nodded silently.

   (end of this chapter)