They all say I'm a good wife

Soon, Li Yue's script was sent over.

"The hidden cliff?"

Qiu Ming read the name of the script and glanced at Li Yue: "What type of drama?"

Looking at the name, it has the meaning of a suspenseful drama, and it also has a bit of literary youth.

Li Yue replied: "Aiyou Film and Television is going to launch several suspense dramas within this year. A friend I know is also working in Aiyou Film and Television. He helped me ask and got one of the spots."

"Oh!"

Qiu Ming nodded and began to flip through the script.

I don't know if it's because of the ups and downs in my mood that made Li Yue very eager to talk at this time, she continued: "My friend is actually a former roommate of mine, who is also from the Chinese Department. The current employment of our Chinese graduates is The situation is more serious, the print media is not very good, it is difficult to find a job, my friend is more lucky, she got into Aiyou, and she does a good job... Well, it is much better than me.

This time, if I can do a good job with the script, he will help me fight to become a signed screenwriter of Aiyou, or directly find a way to enter Aiyou.

This is an opportunity for me, so I really hope to grasp it well, so I wanted to ask you to help me read this script.

Well, I have been writing this script for more than half a month, and I always feel that the plot is not very compact, and something is missing, and it seems that the deadline for the first ten episodes is coming, I...I really have no choice..."

Qiu Ming seemed to be looking at the phone screen very intently, and at the same time seemed to be listening to Li Yue's words, and nodded from time to time, but he didn't listen at all.

At this time, he was quickly summoning the system interface, and then began to try to use "plan modification" to see if he could modify Li Yue's entire script.

According to the urine nature of the system props, if the "plan modification" cannot be done, a prompt message will definitely pop up.

"Ok?"

What Qiu Ming didn't expect was that not long after he decided to use the props, a stream of information entered his mind again. Obviously, the "plan modification" had already worked.

"Why don't you go back and look again, I'm working now, I can't disturb you, I... well, I'm not in a hurry..."

Seeing Qiu Ming's serious look, Li Yue was very moved. Thinking about it, he felt that this was not good. Asking Qiu Ming to help him during working hours would bring him trouble, so he was about to persuade Qiu Ming not to watch it anymore. Thinking of Qiu Ming suddenly raised his head: "Paper and pen."

"what?"

"I want paper and pen."

"Oh... oh, I see!"

Li Yue didn't know what Qiu Ming wanted to do, but she just believed in Qiu Ming, she stood up and ran to the side, and came back with a pen and paper after a while.

Qiu Ming took the pen and paper and began to write.

It's all in his head, but there's so much it feels like it's so full that he just wants to get it out as soon as possible so he can rest his mind.

shhhhhh...

The tip of the pen quickly slid across the paper, one word after another quickly appeared on the paper, and soon formed a sentence, a paragraph, a chapter...

"This...this is?"

Li Yue looked at the writing and was a little stunned.

too fast!

The tip of the pen in Qiu Ming's hand seemed to be able to fly, and the words came out surprisingly fast.

"How could it be so fast? He... doesn't he even think about it?"

Li Yue couldn't help raising her head and glanced at Qiu Ming.

At this time, Qiu Ming's face was focused, as if all his attention was on the pen, Qiu Ming didn't even notice that she looked up at him.

Seeing Qiu Ming's serious look, Li Yue's heart jumped twice violently at that moment, she lowered her head in embarrassment, and never dared to stare at Qiu Ming's face again.

Qiu Ming wrote faster and faster, and he wrote ten episodes in a blink of an eye, and then he felt that his mind was not so "blocked", so he stopped.

"See if you can do it!"

Qiu Ming rubbed his hands, and handed the "copied" manuscript to Li Yue.

It's been a long time since I wrote like today, and my hands are a little sore.

Li Yue had already read a part of it just now, and now he took Qiu Ming's manuscript and read it carefully from the beginning.

Qiu Ming looked at the time, almost two hours had passed before he knew it, he stood up and said, "Look at it first, see if it works, if it doesn't work, I can't help it, my level knows this level .”

After a slight pause, he said again: "Okay, I have to go first, you can find me after you finish reading... Well, don't come to my room to look for me at night, let me call me."

After saying that, he turned around and left.

Li Yue was fascinated by the manuscript written by Qiu Ming.

Really well written...

Only a rough outline of her original story was left, and Qiu Ming helped her make major changes to other lines and scenes.

Although the story was still the same story, the whole script felt completely different to her, and it was completely upgraded several grades.

"Why is he so good? He writes so fast and is so good?"

After reading the manuscript, Li Yue couldn't help raising her head and glanced at the direction where Qiu Ming was leaving.

At this moment, she couldn't help but feel a kind of admiration. This kind of admiration had never happened to Li Lewen, whom she always called "teacher".

However, the scene of Qiu Ming writing the manuscript on the spot just now shocked her deeply and completely conquered her.

Don't look at the same story and the same scene, but in the writing of the script, even a change in a line can make a world of difference in the viewability of the entire plot.

The manuscript that Qiu Ming revised is really great, at least Li Yue thinks so, she is very confident that she will take the manuscript of these ten episodes to Aiyou Film and Television, and she will definitely pass their review.

After thinking about it, Li Yue suddenly picked up a pen, and wrote Qiu Ming and his own name on this manuscript very solemnly.

Among them, Qiu Ming's name is placed in front, and her own name is placed in the back.

She was going to submit the script as a joint screenwriter. Although she conceived the story, Qiu Ming revised the script so well that she felt that it was a great advantage for her to co-author the screenplay.

Letting out a breath, Li Yue felt extremely relieved.

The depression that was scolded by Li Lewen before, all disappeared in front of this manuscript.

After Qiu Ming left, he immediately checked the progress bar of his boost value.

Great harvest today!

Although he used one "plan revision", he got two "plan revisions" on Li Yue. After going back and forth, he actually made money again.

He was basically sure that as long as the person he was helping was depressed, he would be able to get the boost value from enlightenment, but the boost value would be much less.

On the contrary, if it can help reverse the opponent's situation, the boost value will be much more, just like these two times.