Starting My Cultivation With Time Management

Talk about the creation process of this book.

From the initial design of this book to the current finished product, there have actually been several versions.

The first version is the avatar flow, which is similar to controlling several bodies by one person, like opening multiple QQ numbers at the same time, and manipulating one side and manipulating that side.

As a result, the book friends in the group said, "Don't write, the clone is a tauren".

The reason is that the Spanish fighters believed that the avatar could not represent the main body. If the avatar fell in love with a girl, the main body was being bullied.

Here the fighters are divided into two factions. Among them, Protestant fighters believe that if the clone is conscious, it counts as a cow, and if it is not conscious and completely controlled by the protagonist, it does not count.

Pure-blood fighters believe that the clone and the main body are not the same entity, so as long as it is a clone, it is a cow.

(There are also extremists, who think that all the protagonists who wear souls are cows, because the body is passed through by the original owner)

I don't like cows very much, so let's change it to "time management".

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The second version, the original design of time management, was to use the Harry Potter series of time managers.

At the beginning, a heroine character named "Xie Lange" was designed. The Taoist name is "Minghe". Like the protagonist, she has also crossed over from a different world. The name before crossing is the "name" + "Dao number" in front of it and read backwards. . The time manager was also brought by her.

Then the protagonist just crossed over and there was an immortal master. He was seriously injured so he couldn't survive the calamity and needed to repair the injury. So he calculated the protagonist and asked him to find the fragments of the sky-repairing stone. As a reward, he passed his own Taoism to the protagonist.

As a result, the editor said, "This is not very good. Many glass-hearted readers don't like the feeling of being calculated by others" (unless it is a master with a beautiful face, big waist, thin legs and long legs).

I don’t really like the relationship between teachers and students, because if I write it, I will be reported. If I don’t write it, the reader will be scolded. Go to find the celestial stone.

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The third version, a long one-line design.

The original design was a roll of a vest. The protagonist first played Qiu Changtian to join the Kunlun faction, wrote at least 100,000 words, and then turned around to open a new vest, and played the role of Ling Yunpo to join the Shushan faction.

Mainly considering that if the lens is switched frequently, some readers may not be able to adapt to it.

As a result, the editor said, "In this way, your golden finger will not be reflected."

The protagonist's golden finger is "time management", multi-line operation, interspersed with each other, and several characters support each other. This is the core cool point of this article.

For example, if Ling Yunpo wanted to kill someone at a higher level, but he couldn't kill him, he asked Qiu Changtian to ask Ziwei to teach him how to do it. Qiu Changtian wanted to pretend in front of his junior sister, so he borrowed the profound swordsmanship he learned from Ling Yunpo.

If the lens is not switched, there is no multi-line operation, and this cool point is gone.

I am a person who doesn't like to give up the basics. After all, being cool is fundamental. So I changed it to one character and tried to write three or four chapters before switching the shots. At the same time, I delayed the appearance of other vests, so that everyone could be familiar with the three names [Qiu Changtian], [Ling Yunpo], and [Luo Yan] (in order to reduce the Understand the threshold, even the protagonist's real name is temporarily not written)

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The fourth version, Xianxiaweier.

The beginning of the plot is that the protagonist, as Qiu Changtian, with his peerless talent with a clear mind, completes the Kunlun Heavenly Road step by step, shocking the entire Kunlun faction, the elders compete to accept apprentices, and finally is taught by Ziwei to overcome all opinions. Receipt as a pro…

As a result, the editor said, "This routine is too vulgar, and where is the heroine? I want to see her in the first chapter."

Indeed, Xu Yinglian was originally planned to appear in Chapter 8 (and his name was "Xu Qinglian" at the time), but this meant that it was a bit slow.

I struggled with this aspect for a long time. In the beginning, did I describe the Taiqing Sect of Kunlun first, to express the flavor of Xianxia?

Or let Xu Yinglian appear as soon as possible and unfold it in the form of a light novel?

After struggling for about a week, I finally chose the latter.

I don't like slow heat. I can show the flavor of Xianxia slowly in the back. If I can't write one volume, I will write two volumes. At the beginning, readers who can't find the heroine will have to abandon the book.

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The fifth version, Kunlun Mirror.

In the beginning, there was no Kunlun mirror, the protagonist ran back and forth by the time manager, and used the compound decoction to disguise his appearance.

As a result, this will make the protagonist look too disdainful. How bad is it to deceive the brothers and sisters, brothers and sisters, in order to get the fragments of the sky patching stone.

I don't like to disdain the protagonist, so I changed it to Kunlun Mirror Patching the Sky. The protagonist was for a noble purpose and had to join the major sects.

Playing a character is just a feature of the mirror. The protagonist's own character is actually very good, and it will take a long time to deceive someone.

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The sixth version, Mask Flow.

In the beginning, there was no backstab of the Kunlun Mirror. The protagonist played various characters. After getting all the fragments, he stood in the sky, with a hairspray hand, a finger to block Sister An's sword, and so on.

As a result, the book friends in the group also said, "It feels like a spiritual tauren. What the girl likes is your disguised appearance, not you."

I don't like to mess around, so these book friends are banned from speaking. Then arrange Kunlun mirror backstab, UU reading www.uukanshu.com secretly reveal the true side of the protagonist to everyone without the protagonist's knowledge.

For example, Xu Yinglian, for Qiu Changtian's invincible setting, has actually admired to the extent of envy, pain, and even hatred of himself.

In addition, this book is not a sadomasochistic theme, so it is impossible to generate feelings.

But Kunlun Jing quietly revealed the real side of the protagonist to her, and replaced her impression of Qiu Changtian little by little, which changed Xu Yinglian's perception of him.

Another example is An Zhisu's relationship with the indomitable young Ling Yunpo, just a simple sister who loves her brother; Miss Shi doesn't like Luo Yan who pretends to be stupid, etc...

If the protagonist always maintains the mask and character design, there is no way to win them over.

But with Kunlun Mirror's backstab, it's different.

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To sum up, this book has been edited and revised before its release, and a total of six major editions have been changed.

There are countless small versions between major versions, and there are countless changes back and forth.

Here I would like to thank Ruo Ye, the editor in charge, for helping to read and change the text many times.

I would also like to thank the book friends in the group. I hope that in the future, I will post less pictures and discuss the plot more.

In the end, the version you have seen is far from perfect, but it is close to my own limit.

The remaining disadvantage is that it really cannot be optimized.

For example, a reader said that "the protagonist frequently switches and it feels impossible to substitute". In fact, the third version tried a long one-liner, but the biggest cheating point and the cool point of time management were not reflected.

Another example is that a reader said, "Kunlun Mirror wants the protagonist to help and backstab is disgusting." In fact, the fifth version found that if there was no backstab, the problem of "girls falling in love with masks" could not be solved.

Probably that's all.

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