The Girls In This World Are Super Fierce

The Girls In This World Are Super Fierce Chapter 81

2020-11-03

Chapter 81 Please take a leave of absence and change the opening loopholes

Taking the time to read the comments of readers, I found that there are many problems, not my outline problems , but the problem that I can't describe.

For example, the main line is not clear, but the main line has always been clear. I want to get rid of the elder sister and go to Vajra Sect cultivation. I think of the central continent cultivation Holy Land. Goal, become stronger as Sect Master, marry Ms Perfect or something...

As a result, many people still say that there is no main line, so I have to go back and add details.

There is also the problem that the protagonist has no brains. This is different from what I set. The protagonist is very smart. Some of the previous details should be caused by my misunderstanding, or I am not smart enough. look.

There is also the issue that Shen Qianshuang is an adopted daughter. There are still many people who do not know that she is not related to the male protagonist (`). It should be that I did not write clearly enough.

There is also the problem that the plot is too bland. I have this cool point, but my description is not good, so it is boring. I have to see if there is a way to strengthen it.

So I am revising it today to see if I can strengthen these details, it will not affect the plot, you don't need to watch it again.

Finally, thank you again for your comments. Although my outline will not be changed, it still gives me a lot of inspiration.

I'm sorry for any inconvenience. I'll show you my wife Rem and apologize. You can see it from the beginning. I don't know if it's okay to read qq.

(end of this chapter)