The king of training starting from Sakurasou

The three women seemed to be chatting, but it was difficult to hear what they were talking about because of the distance.

Qianliu got a little closer and understood.

How can you use such a cute character to interpret such a complicated soap opera?

Nayuta was complaining to Sena.

What she held in her hand was the main plot of a game script and a character setting sheet.

The finger is pointing at the cute characters printed in 3 models on the table.

Sena asked others to make these, making fantasy-style dogs, cats, raccoons, and bears, all compactly arranged on paper.

All kinds of things happen to animals too.

Sena retorted to Nayuta with a look of displeasure.

You have gone too far. This cat is being trampled by his lover. This puppy is addicted to incest. The raccoon cat has diabetes. Hey, how did you come up with this plot?

Xena felt a little guilty, and then she said loudly: No... can't it?

Nayuta simply ignored Sena's inquiry and asked instead.

what do you think

It's a little different from what I imagined.

Qianhua's expression was quite subtle.

Yes...yes.

Sena lowered her gaze in despair.

Look, what I said.

Why was Nayuta a little proud? It seemed that communicating with laymen was very troublesome for her, and she finally managed to win over someone who shared the same opinion.

Unexpectedly, Qianhua changed the subject: However, there are also surprises. I think this kind of personal level is not bad.

Oh seriously

Xena's eyes lit up.

No, you really feel that way

Nayuta couldn't believe that something like that could be used as a game script. Are you kidding me? I wonder if Chika liked the setting or couldn't bear to hurt Sena's self-confidence, so she nodded in approval.

Nayuta twitched the corner of her mouth. From her perspective as a popular new novel writer and an old two-dimensional person, there was no doubt about it.

This script was a complete failure and failed to arouse the interest of players at all.

Oh no, maybe Archba likes this kind of thing full of tauren warriors.

However, Sena remained unmoved. She looked expectant, as if she was waiting for Chika's comments and explanation.

You are talking about game scripts

At this time, Qianliu, who had listened briefly, finally spoke, and the three women who were caught in the argument noticed him behind them.

Nayuta rushed over waving the setting in his hand as if he had found a savior: Senior, take a look at what is written here, ah, I already said that this kind of thing won't work, but Sena doesn't believe me, it's too much It’s so annoying!”

While handing Qianliu the script and setting collection, she explained the ins and outs of the matter.

It turns out that the cause of the matter is very simple. It may be that he found that the girls around Qianliu could help him, whether directly or indirectly, but Sena herself felt that she was useless.

So I thought about making achievements in other areas, such as career and so on, so that I could help Qianliu, and I tried writing screenplays first.

As a result, the script she wrote with great enthusiasm was criticized by Nayuta as being worthless. In fact, she knew that it was not much better, but that would be too shameful. At least one or two advantages should be picked out.

After reading the script and setting collection, Qianliu was speechless for a while.

Indeed, as Nayuta said, the script is simply...a lot of poisonous points mixed together. If it were drawn into a book, it might be popular, but when it is actually made into a game or even a novel, it will definitely be ridiculous.

However, considering Sena's enthusiasm, Qianliu did not speak for the time being and looked at her with a gaze filled with some intention. After all, the girl seemed to want to hear his opinion very much.

Well, I am also opposed to making this game a morality play, but these characters are so cute, but they are seriously conflicted because of extramarital affairs and incest. In a positive sense, it is quite interesting to look silly. As a result, this For those of us... who are watching, it might turn into a comedy.

As expected of him, he was able to find irrelevant advantages in it.

Nayuta looked over with surprise for the first time: Senior, you have also learned to lie.

Humph, let me tell you, the script I wrote must have merits!

Sena felt confident again.

Obviously, everything Nayuta said just now was forgotten by her. For newcomers, well, the first work is always full of shortcomings.

She is not a genius, definitely not the genius light novelists like Nayuta and Senryu who became popular from the first book.

The words talented are completely irrelevant. At most, they have good academic performance, have their own ideas, and have high emotional intelligence.

After exhaling, Sena took back the script and setting collection from Qianliu.

When I revise it again, it will be a perfect work next time, so just wait patiently!

Chapter 445: Sena begins to become stronger

Waiting for you to write this script into a super-ethical drama?

Nayuta showed no respect at all and poured cold water on her very rudely.

If you don't have talent, don't make do, otherwise in the end you will just be working in vain.

It’s not that Nayuta doesn’t have emotional intelligence, and when he opens his mouth, he just...taunts people.

We are all our own people here, so why bother speaking so tactfully? It's better to go straight to the point.

Sena snorted: No way, I will definitely change it to a perfect state where you have nothing to say!

Nayuta obviously didn't believe it, and said casually: You might as well write this script like a comedy. Compared with family ethics dramas and the like, comedies have a much wider audience.

There was no immediate answer or refutation, and Sena began to think seriously.

Even though it was just Nayuta's casual suggestion, there is a lot of room for maneuver if you think about it carefully.

As expected of a popular light novelist, his casual remarks have the potential to become a hit.

I'll give it a try.