There's something wrong with my role-playing system

With her around, the atmosphere among the few people became much more lively.

Izumi Qianyu also used the magic circle and guidance to make Rikka feel the magic.

Her talent is also very good, and her talent in light magic manipulation is much better than that of Black Cat.

After learning the physical strengthening magic for a few days, I was able to use it in a decent way.

After this period of study, Black Cat has almost mastered telekinesis magic. At least, there aren't many problems with using it for fighting.

Time passes slowly in such daily life...

"Ah, look at my Eternal Spear!"

In Black Cat's room, Rikka was holding her jet black Zechs original second automatic umbrella, looking like she was having a great time.

This black and pink parasol was waved in the air, making bursts of sound, and it looked like it was something like that.

After all, Rikka is no longer just a Chuunibyou, but a disciple of Izumi Qianyu.

Under the influence of strengthening magic, the ordinary parasol in Rikka's hand can easily tear apart steel.

Seeing Rikka like this, neither Izumi Qianyu nor Black Cat paid much attention.

Because since meeting Black Cat, Rikka has rarely gone home.

The two of them have seen her look like a middle-aged girl too many times.

"oops!"

"Snapped!"

Suddenly, Rikka seemed to have hit something and let out a cry of surprise.

Izumi Qianyu and Black Cat also heard the movement over there, and looked in the direction of Rikka with some curiosity.

"this is………"

Looking at the cardboard book that fell in front of her, Rikka's eyes were filled with curiosity.

"...The magical scripture hidden by the Fallen Holy Black Cat?"

Rikka picked up the book and said this with some uncertainty.

"Ah, this is..."

When Black Cat looked at the cardboard book in Rikka's hand, he suddenly seemed to remember something, and a trace of panic flashed in his eyes.

"This is a notepad I use to record some unimportant things. I didn't know where I put it before, but I didn't expect you to find it, Rikka!"

Black Cat said this, and walked to Rikka with a "natural" look on his face, trying to take the notebook.

"Thank you so much, Rikka, now give it back to me!"

"Oh, notepad?"

Looking at the book, Izumi Qianyu, who had read the original work, suddenly seemed to think of something and looked at the black cat with a half-smile.

"Is it really?"

Chapter 147: Black Cat, continue writing novels!

"Rikka, give me that notebook!"

Izumi Qianyu shouted directly to Rikka.

Although Rikka is usually closer to Black Cat, she listens more to her as a teacher.

Hearing what Quan Qianyu said, she avoided the black cat without even thinking and handed the notebook to Quan Qianyu.

"Black Cat-chan!"

Holding the notebook, Quan Qianyu looked at the black cat and said with a half-smile.

"Is this notebook really the notepad you mentioned?"

"Okay, I confess."

Looking at Quan Qianyu's expression, Black Cat knew that he couldn't hide it anymore.

She reached out and scratched her reddish cheeks, and said with some shame.

"This is actually..."

"...the novels I wrote before..."

As a middle school otaku, it is natural that Kuroneko would not be interested in light novels.

She had actually thought about becoming a light novel author before, so that she could fulfill her own interests and support her family at the same time.

However, due to various reasons, all of her manuscripts were rejected, and none of them were officially published.

Gradually, the black cat became a little discouraged.

Thinking that he had no talent in this area, he gave up being a light novel writer.

Therefore, this book that records her previous novels is almost equivalent to a dark history.

She really doesn't want Izumi Qianha and Rikka to see the contents of this novel.

"Eh? Have you actually written a novel, Black Cat, Fallen Saint?"

Rikka next to him looked a little surprised after hearing Black Cat's words.

"It's very poorly written..."

Black Cat looked slightly embarrassed.

"...No publisher is willing to accept my book."

"You can't come to a conclusion so easily!"

Quan Qianyu showed a disinterested expression.

"Maybe those editors don't have much vision!"

"Let me see how it goes!"

After saying that, before Black Cat could stop him, Quan Qianyu, who was full of curiosity, opened the notebook directly.

Izumi Qianyu, who has read the original work, naturally knows the level of Black Cat's creative ability, but she still needs to see the specific writing.

"Teacher, let me be healthy too!"

Seeing this, Rikka also came over with a curious look on her face, and read the contents of the novel with Izumi Qianyu.

When the black cat saw this, he knew he couldn't stop it, so he could only stand aside with a helpless expression.

"......Teacher, what do you think of this novel?"

After waiting for a while, watching Izumi Qianyu rubbing her temples and closing the book, Black Cat asked nervously and somewhat expectantly.

After all, the novel was written by Black Cat herself. Even if it was rejected many times, it was impossible for her to have no expectations at all.

"Well, that's a big problem..."

Putting the novel aside, Izumi Qianyu felt a little headache.

"Eh? Is it a big problem?"

After listening to Quan Qianyu's words, Black Cat bit his lip gently, his expression became a little gloomy.

Although he had already guessed such a result, when Izumi Qianyu really said this, Black Cat still felt a little uncomfortable.

"Ruri-chan, your novel is actually not bad in terms of writing, and the plot is also okay! It's just..."

Some people are not born to write novels, and Black Cat is obviously not such a person.

In terms of writing alone, Black Cat is definitely at the top among all light novelists. Although the plot is a bit average, it is indeed not a shortcoming.

However…………

"...Why is the first half of your book full of settings?"

"Is your book a novel or a collection of settings?"

The shortcoming of Black Cat's novel is obvious, that is, there are too many settings, which affect the plot of the book.

Just like the three golden chapters in online novels, the first few chapters of light novels should be as exciting as possible to attract readers' attention.

Like Black Cat, everything in the front is set up. It's no wonder that no publisher is willing to publish her book despite her good writing skills.

To put it bluntly, Black Cat writes books for self-interest and does not consider the readers or the market at all.

"But…………"

However, after hearing Quan Qianyu's critical words, Black Cat still couldn't help but spoke weakly.

"In my conception, if the novel is to be written realistically and have a sense of immersion, complex settings are inevitable."

"Yes, Ruri-chan, what you said is indeed reasonable!"

After hearing Black Cat's words, Quan Qianyu rubbed his head with a headache.

"However, there is no need to tell all the settings at the beginning, as this will only make people bored!"

The bunch of settings of Black Cat would give a witch like Izumi Qianha a headache, let alone an ordinary reader.

Rikka just looked at it for a while before she couldn't hold it any longer, and now her head is still dizzy.

"You can put the setting in the novel and introduce the setting bit by bit through the plot!"

"To create suspense for readers, such complicated settings will not only not hinder the novel, but will also become its advantage!"

Just like Xingyue, is the setting complicated?

I am very sure of that!

That bunch of settings are absolutely comparable to Black Cat's novels.

But why was Xingyue so popular in Izumi Qianyu’s original world?

It’s because the settings of Xingyue are piled up bit by bit!

The "Xingyue" series introduces the settings bit by bit through the plot.

If the works in the Xingyue series just give you a bunch of settings at the beginning, even if these settings are very exciting, no one would be willing to continue reading.

Moreover, even if there are not many settings, there is no need to tell them all at the beginning.

Because this can create a sense of suspense. Just like in the world before Izumi Qianyu, didn't fantasy novels tell all the levels at the beginning?

But later on, the combat power level in fantasy novels basically only appeared in one step, and subsequent levels were slowly unlocked as the protagonist became stronger.

Sometimes, even the protagonist knows the battle system of the plot, but the readers do not.

What is this for?

This is to enhance the suspense of the novel and whet the reader's appetite so that the reader will continue reading.

It can be said that as a light novelist, Kuroneko lays out all the settings at the very beginning, which is very unqualified.

"Introduce the setting through the plot..."

After listening to Izumi Qianyu's words, the black cat also showed a thoughtful expression.

When her previous submission was rejected, an editor also mentioned the problem of the cumbersome setting of her novel.

However, no one was as patient as Quan Qianyu, and even gave him a solution. Use the plot to slowly introduce the setting...

Black Cat thinks this seems feasible!

"That's right, Ruri-chan. In fact, your writing style is very good and you have a talent for writing novels!"

"Eh? I have a talent for writing novels?"

After hearing what Quan Qianyu said, the black cat who was thinking was slightly surprised.

Quan Qianyu nodded.

"As long as this problem is solved, it will be easy for Black Cat to publish your novel."

"So, Ruri-chan......"

She looked at the black cat and said seriously.

"...You should continue writing novels!"