Things From Another World

278. 278 Chapter Literature Girl

Dunn slammed the table and threw back a few manuscripts handed over by an elf beauty. He shouted: “No! Failed! Call back to rewrite! Remember! Gold three chapters! Gold three chapters!”

Dunn’s big sister stunned the beautiful elf in front of him, his ears pulled down, his neck narrowed his head and looked embarrassed.

She is a very popular poet in the Emerald Corolla. The poems she wrote are very popular with her sisters. I thought that I could easily complete Dunn’s task, confidently handing in new works, but I didn’t expect it. Not qualified.

“I still don’t understand what is the three chapters of gold!? I will explain it to you again! It is to have the protagonist, contradiction, explosion and goal in the first three chapters. If necessary, the golden finger should also be written. There is only one purpose for all purposes. Is to make readers cool!”

“But if there is no foreshadowing,” the Elf girl whispered, “There is no story at all…”

“You don’t need storytelling! The reader doesn’t care what story is told. They are impatient! They just need to be cool! Cool and cool is enough!”

Dunn patted the table and said, “But look at what you wrote. Ah?” The morning light dispels the smog, the girl steps on the waves, the goddess lowers the hymn, and the evil will purify. You are teasing me? Do you understand the vernacular?”

The beautiful elf poet stunned and shook his head in a hurry, staring at Dunn with a big, watery look.

“From the main point of view, this is the story of a heroine you wrote, and this has already been ruined!”

“The first page only has these four sentences. From the style of writing, although it is simple enough, it has no rhythm. What is the name of the protagonist? What is the purpose of the protagonist? What is the purpose of the goddess to descend the Holy Light? ?Golden fingers? Or blessing? Or strengthen the body of the protagonist? You have not written clearly! And this last sentence, are you not nonsense? Everyone knows that evil will definitely lose, so readers don’t care about this. Point, they care about how the protagonist hits his face, how to force it, how cool!”

“Let me repeat the four sentences in the right way, you will appreciate it.”

Dunn brewed it, and under the watchful eyes of the beautiful elf poet, slowly said: “Day, our protagonist A wakes up at home in time, then he quickly climbs to the second floor window, next door young and beautiful girl B according to the usual habits Start bathing – depending on the age limit of the work, this paragraph can continue to be refined or simplified – after the shower, a holy light suddenly descends from the sky, and the goddess discovers that A is peeking at her saint’s bath, so punish him!”

“But, who is A? He is the protagonist of the story! So the goddess is coming!” Under the offensive of the protagonist’s three-inch tongue, the goddess is satisfied and returns a gift from the protagonist A. Intensified the power of the protagonist A, and then purified his body, the church skills, and then handed over to the protagonist A a mission, the evil Z is about to wake up, in order to save the world, he must bring the childhood sweetheart B to go on the road to save the world ——Why should you bring B together? Be the main character, and always have someone warm the bed at night.”

“Then, the protagonist went to find B, but unexpectedly met the villain C who had been secretly in love with B. C mocked the protagonist A, and pulled the hatred hard. Then A slaps C to kill, successfully hits the face, harvests the childhood sweetheart B, and then takes B embarked on saving the world together and began to drive away the evil road. He knocked down the enemy D along the way, conquered the beautiful woman E, defeated the enemy F, and conquered the beautiful woman G…”

Having said that, Dunn has a hand: “Look, isn’t it so cool to write it? Also, use vernacular! Do you understand the vernacular? It’s a straightforward, don’t bend around, what to say.”

“Oh……”

The beautiful elf poet seems to understand and nodded. “In short, is to defeat the enemy and collect beautiful women?”

“Having savvy! What is your name?”

Although she wrote very general, it was the first one to have the courage to submit a manuscript, which can be used as a key training object, so Dunn will do so.

“Dantrian.”

“…”

Dunn was silent for a moment, and said with a strong heart: “If you have time, turn over your bookshelf, maybe you will wake up to strange attributes.”

Danterian’s face is inexplicable.

“Go back and change it. Remember, our main reader is a man, so we should write this story from a male perspective. As for the female perspective, that is the future.”

What Isaari wants is to increase the Elf population. If men don’t have the idea, how can they increase their population? At this time, of course, it is necessary to develop some counterpart literary works, and the dragon horses that have opened the big stallion mode are properly qualified!

“Oh……”

Danterian hesitated for a moment and whispered: “Dunn, the world you said before… Is there a reference?”

Dunn’s eyes lit up: “Are you interested?”

“Ok……”

Danterian nodded. “I always feel that the story you said is not a fictional story. It is like a real world. If there is reference material and it is played under that framework, I should be able to write it.” The story of your satisfaction.”

“Not to make me happy, I just give you inspiration.”

Dunn corrected her: “The story you wrote is ultimately for Queen Isaac to see.”

After that, Dunn smiled again: “But letting you write this article directly is a bit too difficult for you, so…”

Dunn waved his hand and took out a piece of paper. He said smugly: “This is the outline of the story I wrote to you last night. You can take it and circulate it separately and learn.”

“Great!”

Danterian’s eyes lit up, took the outline, and said with confidence: “Please rest assured, swear in the name of the goddess, I will definitely – I will write this novel called!”

“It’s a blind man to teach…”

Watching Dantrian leave, Dunn said: “Next.”

A blond elf girl handed her face confidently on her face: “This is the comic I drew.”

“Oh.”

Dunn just glanced over and instantly took a breath: “What is your name?”

“three–“

Dunn’s eyes jump, don’t tell me that she is called Sanqianyuan…

“Three leaves.”

The Elf girl, Sanye, said with a smile on her head, “Because the seeds that I was born left three leaves.”

“call.”

Dunn breathed a sigh of relief: “Three leaves… that oh…”

“Ok?”

“You…this is not a comic book…”

Dunn took the manuscript papers and his hands were saying: “This is a sketch…”

The three manuscripts that Sanye took up, the mirror, the story, the rhythm are all right, except that the story still can’t jump out of the Prandal circle, the other is impeccable, and even can say that even if you get the earth, you can instantly A hit – because her painter is too scary!

This is not a cartoon at all, but a sketch of a piece!

Every character in the grid, every detail, the leaves of every tree, and even every grass can clearly see the veins above!

It has been too realistic!

“Are you tired of painting like this? How long has it been used?”

“Not tired, not long after, it is very fast to use magic to improve.”

There is a shallow smile on the face of Sanye: “It’s time for a meal, mainly because it takes a little time to think about the story, and painting is not too time-consuming.”

Come to the treasure!

Dunn’s heart is ecstatic, what is Jin Zhengji on the earth! ? These three leaves are simply the popular human printers of Plandal!

“Great!”

Dunn grabbed his hands: “Can you master other styles besides this style of painting? Exaggerated? Funny and funny? Simple?”

Clover is a bit unsure: “There should be no problem…”

“it is good!”

Dunn finally saw hope: “The artist of the official book will decide to be you!”

Sanye stunned: “What is the official book?”

“I will tell you later.”

Dunn smiled and patted the shoulders of the three leaves: “The things that will be conceived in the future are handed over to other people. All you have to do is draw the manuscript. I believe that Queen Isaac and Egwin know that you have made a contribution. I will be very happy.”

“It’s my honor.”

After watching the leaves leave, Dunn licked his hand and was a little impatient.

From the current speed of learning, they will still be bound by Prandahl’s inertia in a short time, it is difficult to play a real strength, in order to come up with something that makes Isaali satisfied, Dunn must be hands-on.

However, he is not good at drawing or writing.

So Dunn made another idea.

The best way to see the results right away is to personally click on them and let them complete the first work with their hands and hands, and then they will understand what the market needs are.

The outline that Dunn had given them before was the first step. In the next step, Dunn decided to come up with a fine outline. Not only that, but there are some very… there, adult things, it is the demand of Isa, he There is no psychological pressure to take it out, but Dunn has a kind of inexplicable excitement when he thinks that he wants to train those stupid elf beauty to create these things.

What did he take out?

Of course, many of the people’s sexual enlightenment teachers on the earth are all famous works. As long as the original framework is modified and the content of heavy taste is removed, some gentle works are born.

If the text is not enough, the official painting of the three-leaf ghost-like animal is absolutely sharp, and the effect of putting it together is self-evident.

It is expected that these things will definitely stimulate the needs of the elves in some way.

Of course, perhaps because of the simplicity of the elves, they may be awakened more slowly, but what Dunn has to do is to wake up their consciousness step by step. As soon as they start to wake up, the latter things have nothing to do with him.