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Chapter 668: Yan Fei's worries

When Shen Xin heard Yan Fei's words, he nodded again and again.

Just like "Saint Seiya", the combination of constellation and saint clothing is an excellent brain hole.

If Che Tian Zhengmei only focused his mind on the constellations and saint clothing, there would certainly not be such a splendid plot as "The Twelve House of Hades".

The same goes for "DN". Note is just a brain hole. What really supports the whole story is the game between Ayue and L, and Nia. The note is only used as a prop to advance the progress of the story.

"I will think about this issue seriously in the next few days."

Even though Shen Xin already knew how to deal with Dachangshu, he still held his breath and didn't tell the layout of the entire comic.

"DN" is a reasoning comic, each plot has logic, and the plot often has unexpected changes.

It is indeed difficult for normal people to create a complete name in a short period of time.

Because of this, Shen Xin will not be too ostentatious, which is of no substantial benefit to him.

Yan Fei did not answer Shen Xin's words, but turned her name again, frowning.

"What's wrong, Sister Yan?" Shen Xin saw Yan Fei's dignified expression, a little puzzled.

"Something is wrong..."

"Ok?"

"The golden finger of "DN"..." Yan Fei looked up at Shen Xin, "I initially thought that the golden finger of "DN" is the same as that of "Crimination", but after reading it, I feel that there are too many of the two. It's different, but what it is, but I can't remember it for a while... Now, I finally understand that the biggest difference between the two comics lies in the golden finger."

"The book of prophecy only predicts the future of others, and can profit or harm from the future. "DN" is to judge the life and death of others. As long as you know the name and appearance of the other person, you can determine the fate of others. This golden finger is too BUG … Isn’t the person who got this golden finger invincible? Maybe the story of "DN" collapsed before the readers got tired of this brain hole."

Shen Xin looked at Yan Fei in surprise, he didn't expect that Yan Fei would consider this step.

What Yan Fei said was not wrong. The stronger the cheat sheet, the more likely the story would collapse.

Why is "Invincible Man" difficult to write? Because at the beginning of the work, the protagonist's level is max, he doesn't need to defeat a strong opponent in order to get a sense of coolness-the protagonist does not have a strong opponent in the work.

In order to attract readers, such works often have to go a different way.

A more clever way is to limit the protagonist’s ability. For example, in "Rurouni Kenshin", Kenshin Himura used to be an "executioner" and later vowed not to kill anymore. Therefore, he used the "inverse blade" that could not kill people. The strength of the author.

The author can also choose to farm, such as "Become a Slime" type of work.

"One Punch Man" is also handled very well. One gave a lot of space to the supporting role, using the "tragic" experience of the supporting role to whet the reader's appetite and pave the way for Saitama's appearance.

Therefore, Shen Xin also understands Yan Fei's thoughts, as long as he knows the opponent's name and appearance, he can use "DN" to get rid of the opponent directly. Therefore, in the eyes of ordinary people, the protagonist in "DN" has almost no opponents.

Those who hold "DN" have too much advantage.

How to use "DN" to attract readers without letting it steal the role of the protagonist is particularly critical.

"Actually, it's easy to deal with. Just limit the conditions for using ‘DN’." Shen Xin explained, "For example, when other characters appear in public view with pseudonyms, is ‘DN’ useless?"

pseudonym! ?

Yan Fei nodded again and again. She had considered too little just now and even forgot the "pseudonym".

"In addition, there are people who use ‘DN’, no matter how powerful he is, but he is not a **** after all. Therefore, he will have shortcomings, such as arrogance, greed, jealousy, cruelty..."

"Stop..." Yan Fei hurriedly called to a halt.

If she didn't stop calling, Shen Xin would probably name all the seven characters in "Steel Refining".

"Now you give me a happy message. Have you already thought of a solution? Whether it is the progress of the plot or the handling of the golden finger." Yan Fei waved her hand.

She was so careful because she was afraid that Shen Xin would be careless and stumble on "DN".

The manga’s brains are very good, but it just doesn’t feel stable.

But after Shen Xin's reminder, Yan Fei also calmed down. The problem she mentioned before is not that there is no way to deal with it, it just takes a little time, and even if a niche manga like "God of Go" can get up, "DN" should also be accepted by readers.

Shen Xin nodded.

"My idea is that the story starts with ‘DN’, but one after another some people have passed away, and there will certainly be people suspecting and investigating, so there will be a rivalry."

"If the protagonist has a ‘DN’, it’s hard to have an opponent."

"Therefore, there are restrictions on the use of ‘DN’. One is to know the opponent’s real name, and the other is to know the opponent’s appearance. If the opponent does not come out or uses a pseudonym, there is no way even if there is a ‘DN’."

"Wait, in that case, isn't this manga more apt to be more witty?" Yan Fei calmed down.

"Yes, I think so." Shen Xin agreed with Yan Fei's guess.

Yan Fei fell into entanglement again.

The combination of evil comics and wits makes it difficult to create. Mr. Shen also has to take into account "Y’s"... Is he really okay?

However, there is a saying that if it is a wise fight, it may really solve the problem of insufficient stamina, and at the same time attract opponents.

The enemies of the villain of ordinary comics are the protagonist and the author. Then, in this comic, Mr. Shen can create conditions for the protagonist on the one hand, and on the other hand stand on the opponent’s side and fight the protagonist wisely. The meaning of fighting each other.

In this process, how to balance Shen Xin's position is particularly critical.

Yan Fei has never seen this type of comics, and her heart is full of expectations for "DN".

"In this case... Mr. Shen, I will submit the name of the short story of "DN" to the magazine now." Yan Fei sorted out the name, took the envelope from Shen Xin, and put the name in.

"Please Sister Yan." Shen Xin chuckled lightly.

"What are you being polite with me?" Yan Fei waved her hand, ignoring a drink, holding her name, and quickly went downstairs.

Yan Fei can’t see the future direction of "DN" yet~www.NovelMTL.com~ She just knows that the idea of ​​this comic is very novel, and the serial comics using this brain hole will also make the plot more interesting after the introduction of wit Extension becomes possible.

Let's not talk about the performance of the serialized comics, now that there is a direction, the follow-up plot can slowly be polished.

Yan Fei took a taxi and returned to the magazine in one go. In a panic, she almost forgot to pay for the car.

Entering the editorial department in a hurry, Yan Fei walked straight to Hook and placed the envelope in front of him.

After being in charge of Shen Xin's new work, Yan Fei was also transferred to Hook's group.

Hook looked at Yan Fei in surprise, not knowing why.

"This is the short title of Teacher Shen's new book." Yan Fei explained.

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